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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36730 Homeless individuals
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Homeless individuals are a part of most societies. Some individuals believe that giving them money is the greatest way to assist them. What percent would you agree with?

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Homeless individuals are a part of most societies. Some individuals believe that giving them money is the greatest way to assist them. What percent would you agree with?
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Homeless individuals are a part of most societies, and many people believe that giving them money is the greatest way to assist them. While direct donations can offer immediate relief, in my opinion, this help deserves only moderate agreement of roughly forty percent, because money alone rarely addresses the deeper causes.

Giving money to homeless individuals can be beneficial in limited circumstances that justify some level of agreement. For instance, a small donation may help a homeless person buy food, transport, or medicine when other support services are inaccessible. Such immediate help preserves dignity and autonomy, which is why many people in caring societies still choose to assist through cash.

However, money handed to homeless individuals often fails to produce lasting improvement in their situation. Without stable housing, healthcare, and employment support, the money is quickly consumed and the cycle of homelessness simply continues. In some cases, unrestricted donations may even worsen harmful behaviour, so cash cannot be the sole way societies assist homeless people. By contrast, charity programmes and social services that fund shelters, counselling, and job pathways tackle the root problems more effectively. Consequently, aligned support from government and community charity assists homeless individuals far more durably than a single donation ever could. For example, a funding scheme that combines housing with mental-health support helps people rebuild independence rather than merely surviving another day. Therefore, most societies gain more when their money flows through structured charity and support systems than when people give cash directly.

Ultimately, giving homeless individuals money has real but limited value, which is why my agreement rests at nearly forty percent rather than higher. Sustainable help requires aligned social services and charity funding, so lasting support, not isolated donations, should guide how societies assist the homeless.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion with a percentage and adds a real example. The thesis sets moderate agreement, and the example shows better help. this help deserves only moderate agreement of roughly forty percent, because money alone rarely addresses the deeper causesa funding scheme that combines housing with mental-health support helps people rebuild independence
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses clear linking words to open ideas and paragraphs. These keep the argument in a logical order. For instanceHoweverBy contrastConsequentlyThereforeUltimately
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with reason and relative clauses well. Meaning stays clear. Without stable housing, healthcare, and employment support, the money is quickly consumedcharity programmes and social services that fund shelters, counselling, and job pathways
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a relative clause accurately. The grammatical control is steady. a small donation may help a homeless person buy food, transport, or medicine when other support services are inaccessible
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These show a wide word range. immediate reliefpreserves dignity and autonomysocial servicesjob pathways
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. These words are spelled accurately. counsellingroughly
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 292 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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