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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35916 Living with friends
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‘Living with friends can bring just as many benefits as living with family.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

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‘Living with friends can bring just as many benefits as living with family.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Living arrangements play a significant role in shaping wellbeing and personal development. It is often argued that sharing a home with friends can be as beneficial as living with family. I largely agree with this view, since friendships can provide strong emotional support and practical collaboration, although family life usually offers greater permanence.

One clear advantage of living with friends is the sense of mutual understanding created by choice rather than obligation. Friends who decide to live together frequently share lifestyles, values, and routines, which reduces conflict and encourages collaboration. From my experience of sharing accommodation at university, regular discussion and compromise strengthened communication skills and fostered a supportive atmosphere similar to that of a family.

Living with friends also promotes independence and social maturity. Unlike family homes, where roles are firmly established, shared living among peers requires equal responsibility for finances, household tasks, and resolving disagreements. Some people argue that family offers stronger long-term security and unconditional care; however, close friendships can also provide reliable support when trust is built through shared challenges.

In conclusion, while living with family delivers emotional depth and lasting security, living with friends can offer comparable benefits, particularly emotional support, collaboration, and personal growth. I therefore agree to a large extent that living with friends can be just as beneficial, especially during life stages that prioritise independence and self-development.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer largely agrees that living with friends brings similar benefits. A personal example from university life supports the view. I largely agree with this viewFrom my experience of sharing accommodation at university, regular discussion and compromise strengthened communication skills
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well structured and flows smoothly. Clear linkers open each idea and paragraph. One clear advantage of living with friendsLiving with friends also promotes independenceSome people argue that family offershowever, close friendships can also provideIn conclusion, while living with family
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses varied and precise sentences with ease. The relative clause below adds a clear reason. Friends who decide to live together frequently share lifestyles, values, and routines, which reduces conflictshared living among peers requires equal responsibility for finances, household tasks, and resolving disagreements
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is controlled well and hard to fault. close friendships can also provide reliable support when trust is built through shared challenges
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. personal developmentemotional supportsocial maturityunconditional care
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including harder words like obligation. obligationatmosphere
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 225 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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