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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35915 Recruitment
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When recruiting new staff, is it more important for a company to look at a candidate’s academic qualifications or his/her personality and ability to work with others? Support your opinion with appropriate reasons and examples.

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When recruiting new staff, is it more important for a company to look at a candidate’s academic qualifications or his/her personality and ability to work with others? Support your opinion with appropriate reasons and examples.
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When organisations recruit new employees, they often balance formal qualifications against interpersonal qualities. Although academic credentials demonstrate subject knowledge, I contend that personality and the ability to work effectively with others are more important in most roles. This is because contemporary workplaces depend heavily on teamwork, adaptability, and collective problem resolution.

Employees who communicate clearly and respect colleagues contribute directly to productivity and morale. These attributes reduce conflict, improve collaboration, and enable diverse skills to be combined efficiently. For instance, a technically capable graduate who rejects feedback may weaken a project team, whereas a collaborative colleague with fewer credentials can rapidly acquire missing skills through collaboration. As a result, interpersonal competence frequently determines whether individual expertise translates into organisational success.

Admittedly, academic qualifications are essential in professions that demand specialised technical knowledge, such as medicine, engineering, or accounting. Nonetheless, qualifications alone rarely guarantee sustained workplace effectiveness, as knowledge can become outdated or narrowly applied. Employers can usually provide additional training, but reshaping ingrained attitudes and behaviours is considerably more difficult. Therefore, selecting candidates with constructive personalities and strong collaborative abilities offers greater long-term value.

In conclusion, while education signals initial capability, it is not the most reliable predictor of performance. Personality and the capacity to work well with others shape everyday interactions and outcomes. For this reason, companies should prioritise interpersonal qualities during recruitment, treating academic qualifications as a supporting rather than decisive factor.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly argues that personality matters more than qualifications. A concrete example about a graduate who rejects feedback supports the view. I contend that personality and the ability to work effectively with others are more importanta technically capable graduate who rejects feedback may weaken a project team
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is logically ordered with strong linkers. These words guide the reader through each stage. For instance, a technically capable graduateAs a result, interpersonal competenceAdmittedly, academic qualifications are essentialTherefore, selecting candidatesIn conclusion, while education signals
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses varied and precise sentences with ease. The contrast clause below is handled smoothly. a collaborative colleague with fewer credentials can rapidly acquire missing skills through collaborationEmployers can usually provide additional training, but reshaping ingrained attitudes and behaviours is considerably more difficult
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is accurate and hard to spot as an error. as knowledge can become outdated or narrowly applied
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic vocabulary and strong collocations. formal qualificationsinterpersonal qualitiessustained workplace effectivenesslong-term value
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including British forms like organisations. organisationsspecialised
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 234 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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