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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35917 Healthcare
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‘Governments should provide free healthcare to everyone in society.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

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‘Governments should provide free healthcare to everyone in society.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Whether healthcare should be universally free remains a major issue in public policy for many governments. I largely agree that governments ought to provide free healthcare for everyone in society, because access to essential medical treatment is a social necessity rather than a market commodity. Nevertheless, such provision should prioritise fundamental medical services and be managed efficiently to ensure long-term financial sustainability.

Free healthcare promotes equity and helps prevent avoidable harm across society. When financial barriers are removed, people are more likely to seek early diagnosis and continuous treatment, which reduces severe illness and long-term public expenditure. In my community, publicly funded clinics have enabled low-income families to obtain medical care and manage diet-related diseases effectively. Consequently, this free provision strengthens social cohesion and helps people stay healthy for longer.

Opponents argue that universal healthcare places excessive pressure on government budgets and weakens efficiency. Although cost concerns are valid, preventive services and progressive taxation can control spending more effectively than fragmented private systems. Indeed, governments that fund fitness education and a healthier lifestyle show that prevention reduces costly diseases while improving the quality of life for people. My own experience in a public hospital involved timely medical treatment without financial stress, which challenges the assumption that free services are inevitably low in quality. Therefore, well-managed free healthcare can serve the whole of society and support increased longevity.

In conclusion, providing free healthcare is both a justified and practical objective for responsible governments. By guaranteeing essential medical services and promoting a healthy routine of exercise and diet, governments can protect people and reduce diet-related diseases. I therefore strongly support universal free healthcare for society within a sustainable framework.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion in its own words and backs it with a real example. The writer states support for free healthcare and shows how clinics helped low-income families. I largely agree that governments ought to provide free healthcare for everyone in societypublicly funded clinics have enabled low-income families to obtain medical care
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach paragraph opens with a clear linking word, so the ideas flow in order. The writer uses these connectors to guide the reader step by step. Nevertheless, such provisionConsequently, this free provisionAlthough cost concerns are validTherefore, well-managed free healthcareIn conclusion, providing free healthcare
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, adding conditions and reasons smoothly. The clauses join ideas clearly without any confusion. When financial barriers are removed, people are more likely to seek early diagnosiswhich challenges the assumption that free services are inevitably low in quality
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence shows correct control of a complex structure with a linking clause. The grammar stays accurate and clear. preventive services and progressive taxation can control spending more effectively than fragmented private systems
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong pairings that fit the topic well. These word choices sound natural and exact. a social necessity rather than a market commoditylong-term financial sustainabilitystrengthens social cohesionsupport increased longevity
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout, including the British form. Words like these are written accurately. prioritiseavoidable
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 277 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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