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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31084 Preserve the beautiful buildings B2
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It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with it?

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It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with it?
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Preserving historic buildings often requires substantial public investment, yet their cultural value extends far beyond appearance. I strongly agree that conserving beautiful structures from the past is important, even when expensive, because they safeguard heritage and deliver long-term social and economic benefits that new construction cannot replace.

The primary reason is that historic buildings embody collective memory and national culture. Architecture reflects the skills, materials, and values of earlier generations, providing tangible links between past and present. For example, restored town halls or traditional houses often become symbols of local identity, strengthening community pride and historical education, particularly among younger generations who otherwise encounter history only through textbooks. Preserving such monuments is therefore an investment in society itself.

Admittedly, critics argue that preservation diverts funds from urgent needs such as housing or transport, and some disagree with heavy government spending on restoration. However, this opinion underestimates the economic contribution of heritage conservation. Well-maintained historic sites attract tourism, support local employment, and stimulate surrounding businesses. Furthermore, adaptive reuse of old buildings for museums or cultural centres can be more sustainable than demolishing and rebuilding, reducing environmental waste while maintaining urban character.

In conclusion, although conserving beautiful buildings from the past can be costly, the cultural, educational, and economic returns justify the expenditure. Policy should support architectural heritage to ensure cities remain meaningful, distinctive, and connected to their history rather than becoming interchangeable modern developments.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer strongly agrees that old buildings should be saved, and supports this with an example about restored town halls. I strongly agree that conserving beautiful structures from the past is importantrestored town halls or traditional houses often become symbols of local identity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows well with clear linkers that connect each argument. The primary reasonFor example, restored town hallsAdmittedly, critics argueHowever, this opinionIn conclusion, although conserving
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a concessive clause and a relative clause with ease, keeping the meaning clear. even when expensive, because they safeguard heritageparticularly among younger generations who otherwise encounter history only through textbooks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a comparison and a participle idea correctly. reducing environmental waste while maintaining urban character
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words that fit the heritage topic. collective memoryheritage conservationadaptive reusearchitectural heritage
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly throughout the essay. expendituredistinctive
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 233 words and has a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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