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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31085 Tourism
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Tourism is good for a less developed country, but the disadvantages of tourism can be as great as the advantages. Discuss it.

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Tourism is good for a less developed country, but the disadvantages of tourism can be as great as the advantages. Discuss it.
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Tourism is frequently promoted as a development strategy for less developed countries because it generates revenue and global visibility. Nevertheless, although the benefits are considerable, the disadvantages can be just as serious. This essay contends that tourism provides economic opportunities while simultaneously creating significant risks.

One major advantage of tourism is its ability to create employment and earn foreign currency. Tourist spending supports accommodation, transport, food services, and local handicrafts, thereby increasing incomes and reducing joblessness. Moreover, tourism can encourage investment in infrastructure such as roads and airports, which may improve living standards and stimulate other sectors of the economy.

Despite these gains, tourism also brings substantial drawbacks. Financial returns are often uneven, as profits may flow to overseas corporations instead of local communities. Excessive reliance on tourism can further expose economies to external shocks, including economic downturns or travel bans. Additionally, large-scale tourism frequently leads to environmental damage, such as pollution and habitat loss, and cultural practises may be commodified to meet visitor expectations.

In summary, tourism can assist development in poorer nations; yet its disadvantages can rival its advantages when growth is poorly regulated. To maximise benefits, governments must prioritise sustainable planning, protect the environment, and ensure meaningful local participation so that tourism supports long-term development rather than dependency.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay argues tourism brings both gains and risks, and supports this with a clear example about jobs and foreign currency. tourism provides economic opportunities while simultaneously creating significant risksTourist spending supports accommodation, transport, food services, and local handicrafts
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linkers that separate the advantages from the drawbacks. One major advantageMoreover, tourism can encourageDespite these gainsAdditionally, large-scale tourismIn summary, tourism
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a concessive clause and a relative clause with ease, keeping the meaning clear. although the benefits are considerable, the disadvantages can be just as seriouswhich may improve living standards and stimulate other sectors
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a cause and result idea correctly. thereby increasing incomes and reducing joblessness
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words that fit the tourism topic. foreign currencyexternal shockshabitat losssustainable planning
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including the British form. practisesmaximise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 211 words and shows a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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