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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31086 Media impact B2
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Mass media, including TV and newspaper, have a great influence on humans, particularly on the younger generation. It can shape people's opinions. What is your opinion?

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Mass media, including TV and newspaper, have a great influence on humans, particularly on the younger generation. It can shape people's opinions. What is your opinion?
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Contemporary mass media, notably television and newspapers, exert great influence over public thinking, with younger audiences being especially susceptible. I strongly agree that these channels shape human opinions because they frame information repeatedly and authoritatively. While media can inform and educate, its persuasive power often directs attitudes before critical thinking is fully developed, particularly during formative years.

Firstly, constant exposure to television and newspaper content normalises particular viewpoints and priorities among the youth. News selection, headlines, and visual framing guide attention towards some topics while pushing others aside. For teenagers who rely on media to understand society, repeated narratives about success, beauty, or risk quietly establish values that later feel like personal beliefs. This effect is amplified by advertising and emotive storytelling, which associate ideas with admired public figures and strong feelings, strengthening media's influence over each new generation.

However, some argue that individuals choose media selectively and are not passive recipients. This is partly true, but young people often lack the media literacy required to recognise bias, commercial incentives, and ideological manipulation. Moreover, competitive news cycles and sensational programmes intensify influence by prioritising engagement over accuracy. Consequently, simplified or extreme opinions based on distorted information can spread rapidly and appear socially acceptable.

In conclusion, mass media powerfully shapes human opinions, particularly among the young, through repetition, framing, and emotional appeal. Strengthening media awareness alongside responsible regulation of news content is therefore essential to balance influence with informed and independent judgement.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a firm opinion that media shapes young people's views, then supports it with a clear point about repeated stories. This gives strong, specific backing. I strongly agree that these channels shape human opinionsrepeated narratives about success, beauty, or risk quietly establish values
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas flow well from one paragraph to the next. The linking words below guide the reader through the argument and the ending. FirstlyHoweverMoreoverConsequentlyIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The phrases below join ideas using contrast and give extra detail, and the meaning stays clear. While media can inform and educate, its persuasive power often directs attitudeswhich associate ideas with admired public figures and strong feelings
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct construction that adds a reason to the main idea. because they frame information repeatedly and authoritatively
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and natural collocations. The phrases below are precise and fit the topic well. exert great influenceespecially susceptiblemedia literacyemotive storytelling
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. Both words below are spelled well. normalisesrecognise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 241 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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