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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31083 Poor lifestyles B2
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Poor lifestyles have a negative impact on people's health. List some unhealthy lifestyles and discuss what government services could help?

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Poor lifestyles have a negative impact on people's health. List some unhealthy lifestyles and discuss what government services could help?
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Unhealthy lifestyles significantly contribute to preventable illness in modern societies. Everyday decisions related to diet, physical activity and substance use influence long-term health and place continuous strain on public healthcare systems. Identifying harmful habits and the role of government services is therefore essential for improving population wellness and fitness.

Several common lifestyles are particularly damaging to health. Poor nutrition, marked by frequent intake of processed food high in sugar, salt and fat, increases obesity and heart disease. Physical inactivity, often linked to sedentary employment and urban living, weakens fitness and mental health. Moreover, smoking and excessive alcohol consumption further raise the risk of cancer, respiratory disorders and liver disease among people with poor lifestyles.

Government services can mitigate these problems through prevention and support. Firstly, public health education and clear food labelling guide people towards healthier dietary choices and improved wellness. Furthermore, funding for parks, cycling lanes and community sports facilities promotes regular exercise and fitness across income groups, benefiting people at all levels. In addition, tobacco and alcohol taxation, advertising controls and free cessation programmes discourage unhealthy consumption, while strong primary care allows early advice and intervention for poor health habits. Consequently, government services targeting unhealthy lifestyles deliver measurable improvements in population wellness and fitness.

In conclusion, unhealthy diets, inactivity and substance misuse seriously damage individual and public health. Nevertheless, effective government services that educate people, shape healthier environments and provide accessible healthcare can reduce preventable diseases. Sustained public investment is therefore vital for supporting healthier lifestyles and improving long-term national wellbeing.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay lists harmful lifestyles and explains helpful government services, with a clear example about food labelling and taxes. public health education and clear food labelling guide people towards healthier dietary choicestobacco and alcohol taxation, advertising controls and free cessation programmes
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linkers that connect the causes and the solutions. Firstly, public health educationFurthermore, funding for parksIn addition, tobaccoConsequently, government servicesIn conclusion, unhealthy diets
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a participle phrase and a concessive linker with ease, keeping the meaning clear. often linked to sedentary employment and urban livingNevertheless, effective government services that educate people
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a list and a result idea correctly. while strong primary care allows early advice and intervention
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise health words that fit the topic. processed foodsedentary employmentcessation programmespopulation wellness and fitness
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly throughout the essay. consumptionintervention
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 253 words and shows a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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