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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6154 Economic Growth R1
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Governments promise continuous economic growths, but it’s actually an illusion. Some people think that governments should abandon this. Talk about its validity and implications.

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Governments promise continuous economic growths, but it’s actually an illusion. Some people think that governments should abandon this. Talk about its validity and implications.
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Governments frequently promise continuous economic growth, presenting perpetual expansion as both achievable and necessary for society. In particular, this promise of endless growth is increasingly an illusion in mature and environmentally constrained economies. On the whole, in my opinion, governments should abandon the promise of constant expansion and redefine prosperity and development more realistically.

Moreover, the idea of continuous growth ignores structural limits such as resource scarcity, an ageing population, and environmental degradation. For instance, in advanced economies productivity gains are incremental, so government targets for rapid economic growth become unrealistic. Furthermore, when the government insists on such a promise, policy credibility suffers, and short-term stimulus is prioritised over long-term stability. Indeed, excessive borrowing and deregulation increase financial risk, inflation, and inequality rather than genuine and sustainable development.

Admittedly, some argue that abandoning growth commitments could reduce investment confidence and employment across society. However, this concern assumes growth is the sole driver of wellbeing, whereas targeted investment in health and sustainability also supports jobs. Consequently, countries that focus on productivity, resilience, and equitable resource management often maintain social stability with modest economic growth.

In conclusion, abandoning the illusion of endless economic growth is therefore constructive rather than damaging for any government. Ultimately, by shifting emphasis towards sustainable development and living standards, the state can set honest promises and design more credible policy.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly argues that endless growth is an illusion and governments should drop it. The point about resource scarcity and ageing population gives strong support. governments should abandon the promise of constant expansion and redefine prosperitystructural limits such as resource scarcity, an ageing population, and environmental degradation
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses many clear connectors to open ideas and show contrast. They make the argument flow well. In particularMoreoverFor instanceAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds complex sentences with ease, such as a time clause and a concessive clause. The meaning stays clear. when the government insists on such a promise, policy credibility suffersthis concern assumes growth is the sole driver of wellbeing, whereas targeted investment
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence here is accurate and well controlled with a subordinate clause. It reads naturally. excessive borrowing and deregulation increase financial risk, inflation, and inequality
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise economic words and good collocations. These show a broad vocabulary. perpetual expansionproductivity gainspolicy credibilitysustainable development
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including degradation and equitable. This is careful spelling. degradationequitable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 222 words, which falls inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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