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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6155 Personality and Behaviour R1
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Scientists have been debating the impact of nature and nurturing on people’s personality and behaviour. Which one do you think has a greater influence on people’s personality and behaviour?

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Scientists have been debating the impact of nature and nurturing on people’s personality and behaviour. Which one do you think has a greater influence on people’s personality and behaviour?
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Debate persists over whether inherited traits or life experiences exert a stronger influence on personality and behaviour. Although genetic predispositions establish a biological baseline, I contend that nurturing has the greater impact because social environments continuously shape habits, values, and emotional regulation. Personality is not fixed at birth; rather, it evolves through learning, relationships, and cultural expectations across time.

The strongest reason is that upbringing and education directly condition behaviour through reinforcement, modelling, and feedback. Children absorb norms from caregivers and schools, which influence self-control, empathy, and motivation. For instance, supportive parenting that rewards effort commonly fosters resilience and perseverance, whereas unstable environments often encourage anxiety or aggression, demonstrating that nurture creates enduring behavioural patterns.

Admittedly, biological factors affect temperament, such as sensitivity or energy levels, but their influence is filtered through context. Similar genetic tendencies can lead to contrasting outcomes depending on discipline, opportunities, and peer groups. A naturally impulsive child, when guided by clear boundaries and mentoring, may channel energy productively, while the same tendency can become disruptive in the absence of consistent nurturing.

Overall, nature establishes initial tendencies, but nurturing determines how they are expressed and sustained. Continuous exposure to family practises, education systems, and social norms shapes behaviour throughout the lifespan. Therefore, nurturing has the greater influence on personality and behaviour because it actively transforms biological potential into stable and socially patterned outcomes.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that nurture matters more and puts the topic in the writer's own words. It backs this up with a real example about parenting. I contend that nurturing has the greater impactsupportive parenting that rewards effort commonly fosters resilience
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas move in a clear order and each paragraph starts with a helpful linking word. These connectors guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next. Although genetic predispositionsThe strongest reason is thatFor instanceAdmittedlyOverallTherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with linked clauses to compare ideas clearly. This shows control of complex language with no loss of meaning. whereas unstable environments often encourage anxiety or aggressionA naturally impulsive child, when guided by clear boundaries and mentoring, may channel energy productively
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence joins two contrasting ideas correctly with a linking word. The grammar stays accurate and clear. nature establishes initial tendencies, but nurturing determines how they are expressed
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs. These show a wide and correct vocabulary. genetic predispositionsbiological baselineemotional regulationenduring behavioural patterns
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including British forms like behaviour and practises. This meets the spelling standard. behaviourpractises
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 227 words, which is within the 200 to 300 word limit. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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