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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6140 University Fees R1
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University tuition fees are increasing. Some argue that higher education should be made free. To what extent do you agree?

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University tuition fees are increasing. Some argue that higher education should be made free. To what extent do you agree?
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Rising university tuition fees have intensified debate about whether higher education should be free for every student. In particular, I largely agree that free higher education is desirable, because it ensures equal access to university and long-term social benefit.

Moreover, the strongest argument for free tuition is improved equality of opportunity across higher education. For instance, high fees discourage capable students from low-income backgrounds, even when student loans reduce the upfront cost of a degree. Furthermore, when universities remove financial barriers, enrolment reflects ability rather than family income, which strengthens the skilled workforce that free education produces. Indeed, countries that broaden access to higher education tend to benefit from higher productivity and social mobility over time.

Admittedly, opponents argue that free tuition is unfair because graduates earn more and should contribute to the cost of their degree. However, this concern overlooks the public returns of higher education, including innovation and improved services that justify free college study. Consequently, a tax-based funding model lets graduates contribute proportionally rather than paying upfront fees that restrict access to university.

In conclusion, I strongly support free higher education to a large extent, because it promotes fairness and national development. Ultimately, although the funding challenge exists, equitable taxation can cover the cost, so the gains of free university education outweigh the expense.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion and reshapes the topic in their own words. An example about low-income students supports the view. I largely agree that free higher education is desirablehigh fees discourage capable students from low-income backgrounds
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach idea opens with a clear linking word, so the essay flows in a logical order. In particularFor instanceFurthermoreAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses an even-when clause and a which clause to build complex sentences. The meaning is clear. even when student loans reduce the upfront cost of a degreewhich strengthens the skilled workforce that free education produces
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis concessive sentence joins contrasting ideas correctly and clearly. opponents argue that free tuition is unfair because graduates earn more
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. equality of opportunityfinancial barrierssocial mobilitypublic returns
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including these British forms. enrolmentequitable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 217 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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