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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #49024 Rural to Urban
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Around the world, an increasing number of people are migrating from rural to urban areas. What is your opinion towards the phenomenon? Give examples to support your view.

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Around the world, an increasing number of people are migrating from rural to urban areas. What is your opinion towards the phenomenon? Give examples to support your view.
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Around the globe, rural to urban migration is accelerating as people seek better opportunities and essential services. In my view, this shift is largely positive for individuals and national development, provided cities plan effectively and inclusively. Urbanisation can raise productivity and access to education and healthcare, although unmanaged growth creates pressures that must be addressed carefully.

The strongest benefit is economic efficiency. Cities concentrate firms, skills, and infrastructure, enabling innovation, specialisation, and higher wages. For example, migrants to metropolitan areas often find formal employment, training, and professional networks unavailable in villages, which improves household incomes and strengthens local tax bases. These gains can then finance public transport, housing, and utilities for expanding urban populations.

Critics argue that urbanisation deepens inequality and strains housing, transport, and the environment. This risk is real when planning lags behind migration, leading to congestion or informal settlements. However, targeted policies such as zoning reform, affordable housing programmes, and balanced regional investment can mitigate harm while still allowing mobility to lift living standards and social mobility.

In conclusion, rural to urban migration is a constructive force when managed with foresight and collaboration. By harnessing agglomeration benefits and investing in inclusive infrastructure, governments can convert population movement into sustained growth. The priority is not to resist urbanisation, but to govern it so that cities remain productive, liveable, and equitable over time.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that migration is mostly positive and supports it with an example about migrants finding formal jobs. The view and support are both clear. this shift is largely positive for individuals and national developmentmigrants to metropolitan areas often find formal employment, training, and professional networks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay opens paragraphs with clear linkers and uses example and contrast words. The ideas connect smoothly. The strongest benefitFor example,However,In conclusion,then
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds long sentences with concession and reason clauses. The meaning is clear throughout. although unmanaged growth creates pressures that must be addressed carefullyThis risk is real when planning lags behind migration, leading to congestion or informal settlements
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence about policies is joined correctly and reads smoothly. The grammar is strong. targeted policies such as zoning reform, affordable housing programmes, and balanced regional investment can mitigate harm
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and pairings like economic efficiency and agglomeration benefits. This shows a broad word range. economic efficiencyagglomeration benefitssocial mobility
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including the British form liveable. Spelling is accurate. liveableinfrastructure
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 224 words and a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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