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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #4366 Space Exploration R1
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Governments should invest more money in improving living standards on earth than in space exploration. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

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Governments should invest more money in improving living standards on earth than in space exploration. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
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Many governments must choose between funding space programmes and tackling urgent problems on Earth. Although exploration beyond Earth has scientific merit, I largely agree that public money should be directed first towards improving living standards, because immediate social needs affect more citizens and deliver clearer public value.

The strongest reason is that investment in health, housing, and education directly enhances human wellbeing. In my experience of living in a rapidly expanding city, overcrowded hospitals and unreliable public transport have reduced productivity and quality of life. Spending on clean water, preventive healthcare, and affordable housing lowers disease rates, supports employment, and reduces long-term government costs, benefits that are far more urgent than funding distant missions.

Advocates of space exploration claim that it stimulates innovation and national prestige, which is partly convincing. Satellite research has improved communication and weather forecasting. Nevertheless, these gains are indirect and slow, whereas comparable innovation can arise from investment on Earth in renewable energy, digital networks, and resilient cities. Such spending addresses climate risks and inequality while still strengthening scientific capability.

In conclusion, while space exploration expands knowledge, governments should prioritise funding that raises living standards on Earth. Targeting immediate social challenges produces faster, broader benefits and creates a stable foundation from which ambitious space projects can be pursued more responsibly in the future.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer agrees that money should go first to living standards and supports it with personal experience of city life. public money should be directed first towards improving living standardsovercrowded hospitals and unreliable public transport have reduced productivity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs begin with clear signposting phrases that link the ideas smoothly. The strongest reason is thatIn my experience of livingNevertheless, these gains are indirectIn conclusion, while space exploration
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with contrast and reason that read clearly. Although exploration beyond Earth has scientific meritwhereas comparable innovation can arise from investment on Earth
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses an appositive structure correctly and reads with ease. benefits that are far more urgent than funding distant missions
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural pairings about policy. scientific meritpreventive healthcarenational prestigeresilient cities
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThese words are spelled correctly. explorationproductivity
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 217 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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