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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #4361 Gambling R1
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Gambling is an activity which causes more harm than good and so should be made illegal in all countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples to support your response.

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Gambling is an activity which causes more harm than good and so should be made illegal in all countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples to support your response.
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Gambling is often defended as harmless entertainment, yet its social consequences extend far beyond individual choice. I largely agree that gambling causes more harm than good and should be made illegal across countries, although limited regulation is sometimes proposed as an alternative.

The most compelling reason for prohibition is the severe personal and social damage linked to addiction. Problem gambling frequently leads to debt, family breakdown, and mental health disorders, which place long-term pressure on welfare and healthcare systems. For example, individuals who develop compulsive betting habits may prioritise wagering over rent or education, creating cycles of poverty that are difficult to reverse.

Opponents argue that legal gambling generates tax revenue and employment, and that outright bans encourage illegal markets. However, these benefits are limited when measured against enforcement costs and social harm, while black markets already flourish under partial legality. Countries with widespread betting outlets illustrate that availability normalises risky behaviour rather than controlling it through regulation.

Overall, the scale of financial loss, addiction, and social disruption caused by gambling outweighs its economic contribution. While regulation may reduce some risks, comprehensive illegality sends a clearer message and prevents harm before it occurs. Therefore, I strongly support making gambling illegal in all countries to protect individuals and society.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly agrees that gambling should be illegal and gives a real example about debt and poverty to support the view. gambling causes more harm than good and should be made illegal across countriesmay prioritise wagering over rent or education
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs begin with clear signposting phrases that keep the argument easy to follow. The most compelling reason for prohibitionFor example, individuals who developHowever, these benefits are limitedOverall, the scale of financial loss
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses relative and concessive clauses that add depth while staying clear. which place long-term pressure on welfare and healthcare systemsWhile regulation may reduce some risks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a relative clause correctly and reads smoothly. creating cycles of poverty that are difficult to reverse
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses strong academic words and natural pairings about gambling harm. harmless entertainmentcompulsive betting habitssocial disruptioneconomic contribution
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThese words are spelled correctly, including the British form. prioritiseflourish
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 208 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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