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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #4363 Success R1
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Success in today's society is measured in terms of wealth. To what extent do you agree with this definition of success? What other measures of success should society take into consideration?

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Success in today's society is measured in terms of wealth. To what extent do you agree with this definition of success? What other measures of success should society take into consideration?
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In contemporary societies, success is frequently equated with financial wealth, as income and assets are visible and easily compared. I partly agree with this view because economic security enables opportunity and independence. However, defining success solely through wealth is narrow and ignores other outcomes that sustain individuals and communities.

Firstly, wealth remains an important measure because it reflects productivity, skills, and contribution to the economy. Higher earnings often result from education, innovation, or entrepreneurial risk, which society values and rewards. For example, financial stability allows people to invest in health, housing, and lifelong learning, reinforcing long-term capability.

Nevertheless, many forms of success cannot be reduced to income alone and are equally significant. Social contribution, such as meaningful work, ethical behaviour, or public service, strengthens social cohesion even when it is modestly paid. Similarly, personal fulfilment, mental wellbeing, and balanced relationships indicate a successful life, as seen when individuals prioritise purpose and resilience over high salaries.

In conclusion, while wealth is a practical and influential indicator of success, it should not dominate society's judgement. A broader definition that values contribution, wellbeing, and personal growth offers a more accurate assessment of achievement. Such an approach encourages sustainable success that benefits both individuals and society as a whole.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer partly agrees that wealth shows success and gives a clear example about investing in health and learning. defining success solely through wealth is narrowallows people to invest in health, housing, and lifelong learning
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear ordering and contrast words open the paragraphs and connect the ideas well. Firstly, wealth remains an important measureFor example, financial stabilityNevertheless, many forms of successIn conclusion, while wealth is a practical
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses well-built sentences that add examples and contrast with ease. as seen when individuals prioritise purpose and resilience over high salariesit should not dominate society's judgement
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a relative clause correctly and it is easy to read. which society values and rewards
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural collocations about achievement. economic securityentrepreneurial risksocial cohesionpersonal fulfilment
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThese words are spelled correctly, including the British form. fulfilmentwellbeing
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 205 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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