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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #38526 The traffic congestion
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The traffic congestion has increased massively across the globe. The government has proposed a solution to raise taxes to reduce the traffic jam. What is your view on this?

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The traffic congestion has increased massively across the globe. The government has proposed a solution to raise taxes to reduce the traffic jam. What is your view on this?
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Traffic congestion has intensified across the world, harming economic productivity, environmental quality, and daily mobility in major cities and growing urban regions. In response, some governments have proposed raising taxes on drivers to reduce traffic jams. While fiscal measures can influence travel behaviour, increasing taxes alone is an insufficient and potentially unfair response.

Higher charges on fuel, vehicle ownership, or road access may discourage some non-essential car journeys, particularly among middle-income commuters. For instance, congestion pricing in central business districts can encourage travellers to switch to public transport or alter travel times. However, where public transport is overcrowded or unreliable, taxation simply increases financial pressure rather than effectively reducing traffic volumes.

Moreover, heavy reliance on taxation risks deepening social inequality without addressing the structural causes of congestion. Wealthier motorists can absorb higher costs with minimal behavioural change, whereas lower-income workers who depend on cars for shift work or remote locations are disproportionately affected. A more sustainable strategy involves long-term investment in reliable mass transit, integrated land-use planning, and flexible working arrangements. When these policies are implemented and transport and urban systems need to be aligned carefully, commuting patterns can change in a practical and inclusive way, leading to lower private car dependence.

In conclusion, higher taxes may generate limited behavioural adjustments, but they should not be treated as the main solution to traffic congestion. Meaningful and lasting reductions require broader transport and urban policies that expand realistic alternatives to private car use. Such alternatives benefit both efficiency and social equity.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear view in "increasing taxes alone is an insufficient and potentially unfair response". A concrete example about congestion pricing and public transport supports the argument. increasing taxes alone is an insufficient and potentially unfair responsecongestion pricing in central business districts can encourage travellers to switch to public transport
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itLinkers like "However" and "Moreover" join the ideas, and "A more sustainable strategy" opens a paragraph clearly. The flow from problem to solution stays logical. For instanceHoweverMoreoverA more sustainable strategyIn conclusionSuch alternatives
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe contrast sentence "Wealthier motorists can absorb higher costs with minimal behavioural change, whereas lower-income workers who depend on cars" shows precise structure. A where-clause adds variety. Wealthier motorists can absorb higher costs with minimal behavioural change, whereas lower-income workers who depend on carswhere public transport is overcrowded or unreliable, taxation simply increases financial pressure
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "Higher charges on fuel, vehicle ownership, or road access may discourage some non-essential car journeys" is grammatically clean and controlled. Higher charges on fuel, vehicle ownership, or road access may discourage some non-essential car journeys
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itTopic terms like "mass transit" and "land-use planning" show a broad vocabulary. Traffic congestionsocial inequalitymass transitland-use planning
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British forms "behaviour" and "travellers". behaviourtravellers
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 250 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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