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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #39162 Polygamy
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Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. What solutions can you bring forward to decrease this issue?

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Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. What solutions can you bring forward to decrease this issue?
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The growth of polygamy in many societies has raised concerns about social stability, gender equality, and legal rights. Although cultural traditions contribute to its persistence, effective solutions can reduce its prevalence. Stronger legal regulation combined with long-term social reforms offers the most practical way to address this issue.

One essential solution is the consistent enforcement of marriage laws. Where polygamy is restricted or illegal, weak monitoring often allows informal unions to continue unchecked. Governments should strengthen civil registration systems and apply clear penalties for unlawful marriages. In addition, public education campaigns can explain the legal consequences of polygamy and promote monogamous family models, particularly through schools and community centres.

Another crucial approach is addressing the economic and social factors that sustain polygamy. In some communities, men take multiple wives to increase household labour or social status, while women accept such arrangements due to financial dependence. Expanding access to education, employment, and property rights for women can reduce this vulnerability. When women are economically independent, they are better able to reject unequal marital practises and prioritise stable partnerships.

In conclusion, reducing polygamy requires more than simple prohibition. Effective legal enforcement, public awareness, and improved economic opportunities, especially for women, work together to challenge the conditions that allow the practice to spread. A balanced strategy targeting both law and society is therefore essential.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer sets out a clear solution in "Stronger legal regulation combined with long-term social reforms offers the most practical way to address this issue". A specific measure about civil registration and penalties supports it. Stronger legal regulation combined with long-term social reforms offers the most practical way to address this issueGovernments should strengthen civil registration systems and apply clear penalties for unlawful marriages
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear openers like "One essential solution" and "Another crucial approach" guide each paragraph. Linkers such as "In addition" and "In conclusion" keep the flow smooth. One essential solutionIn additionAnother crucial approachWhen women are economically independentIn conclusiontherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "Where polygamy is restricted or illegal, weak monitoring often allows informal unions to continue unchecked" shows a clear conditional structure. A contrast sentence with while adds variety. Where polygamy is restricted or illegal, weak monitoring often allows informal unions to continue uncheckedIn some communities, men take multiple wives to increase household labour or social status, while women accept such arrangements
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "Expanding access to education, employment, and property rights for women can reduce this vulnerability" is grammatically clean. Expanding access to education, employment, and property rights for women can reduce this vulnerability
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise terms like "gender equality" and "civil registration systems" show a broad vocabulary. gender equalitycivil registration systemspublic education campaignseconomically independent
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form "practises" and the word "prohibition". practisesprohibition
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 221 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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