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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37669 Spoken languages
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Of the estimated 7,000 languages spoken in the world today, nearly half are in danger of disappearing, in some cases because they are being replaced by international languages. In your view, does this matter?

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Of the estimated 7,000 languages spoken in the world today, nearly half are in danger of disappearing, in some cases because they are being replaced by international languages. In your view, does this matter?
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Many of the world's languages face extinction as global tongues expand through education, media, and commerce. In my view, this loss matters greatly because language is not merely a tool for communication but a carrier of knowledge and identity. Allowing widespread replacement by international languages produces cultural and practical costs that outweigh the convenience gained in global interaction.

First, endangered languages embody unique worldviews and local knowledge that cannot be fully translated. Vocabulary reflects ecological understanding, social customs, and historical experience developed over centuries. When a community abandons its mother tongue for a dominant language, oral traditions and specialised knowledge often vanish, weakening cultural diversity and reducing humanity's collective intellectual inheritance.

Admittedly, international languages facilitate mobility, education, and economic participation, which is a genuine benefit in a globalised economy. However, replacing minority languages entirely is unnecessary and counterproductive. Bilingual education and public recognition can preserve linguistic heritage while ensuring access to global opportunities, as speakers who maintain two languages often gain cognitive flexibility, confidence, and stronger social inclusion.

Overall, the disappearance of languages matters because it erodes cultural diversity and discards irreplaceable forms of knowledge. While international languages are undeniably useful, they should complement rather than eliminate local speech. Protecting endangered languages through education and thoughtful policy is therefore not sentimental preservation, but a rational investment in human diversity, resilience, and long-term cultural sustainability.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states clearly that language loss matters and why. A point about oral traditions gives real support. this loss matters greatly because language is not merely a tool for communication but a carrier of knowledge and identityoral traditions and specialised knowledge often vanish
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows in a clear order with strong linking words. These connectors guide the reader well. First,Admittedly,However,Overall,therefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with when-clauses and contrast. This shows range and precision. When a community abandons its mother tongue for a dominant languageas speakers who maintain two languages often gain cognitive flexibility
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis relative clause is joined correctly and reads smoothly. The grammar control is strong. local knowledge that cannot be fully translated
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and good pairings. These fit the language topic. unique worldviewscultural diversitylinguistic heritagecognitive flexibility
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including British forms like these. globalisedspecialised
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 224 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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