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Some people think that teachers should be held responsible for teaching students to judge right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that teachers should be held responsible for teaching students to judge right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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There is an ongoing debate about whether teachers should shape students' moral judgement or restrict their role to academic instruction. While some argue that ethics education is essential for social order, others believe this responsibility belongs primarily to families rather than to teachers. In my view, teachers should contribute to the moral development of students alongside academic teaching, because schooling naturally combines knowledge with character.

Supporters of a moral role for teachers emphasise that schools are major environments where children learn to behave through daily interaction with instructors and peers. Teachers regularly handle discipline, collaboration and fairness, which inevitably involves ideas of right and wrong. For example, when instructors address bullying or cheating, they must explain why such conduct is wrong rather than merely enforcing rules. Because students spend substantial time in schooling, consistent guidance from teachers can reinforce respectful behaviour and social responsibility.

By contrast, opponents argue that teachers are trained mainly as subject specialists, not as moral authorities. They claim that values vary across cultures, so schools risk imposing beliefs that conflict with what children learn at home. This concern is reasonable, because excessive moral instruction could divert students from academic goals. However, teaching basic principles such as honesty and accountability does not impose ideology on students. Instead, it supports effective learning and orderly classrooms.

Overall, although academic achievement is a central purpose of education, it cannot be separated from how students behave. Teachers should not replace parents. Yet they should clearly share responsibility for guiding the right and wrong judgement of children, thereby creating disciplined and supportive learning environments for every student.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay discusses both views on the teacher's role and gives a balanced opinion. It states "teachers should contribute to the moral development of students alongside academic teaching" and supports it with the example of when "instructors address bullying or cheating". teachers should contribute to the moral development of students alongside academic teachingwhen instructors address bullying or cheating
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe two views are laid out in clear ordered paragraphs with strong linkers. Phrases like "For example", "By contrast", "However", and "Overall" guide the reader. Supporters of a moral roleFor example, when instructorsBy contrast, opponents argueHowever, teaching basicOverall, although academic
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses relative and reason clauses with precision. The "which inevitably involves ideas of right and wrong" clause shows a smooth complex form. Teachers regularly handle discipline, collaboration and fairness, which inevitably involves ideas of right and wrongBecause students spend substantial time in schooling, consistent guidance from teachers can reinforce respectful behaviour
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex grammar is consistent and correct. The clause "because excessive moral instruction could divert students from academic goals" is well formed. because excessive moral instruction could divert students from academic goals
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise education vocabulary and collocations. Phrases like "moral judgement", "subject specialists", and "social responsibility" show a broad range. moral judgementmoral developmentsubject specialistssocial responsibility
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. British forms like "behaviour" and "judgement" are written correctly. behaviourjudgement
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 265 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, both views, and a conclusion.
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