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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37299 The ownership of cars
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The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Restricting car ownership to one vehicle per family is often proposed as a solution to traffic congestion and air pollution. I largely disagree with this approach because it is a blunt policy that overlooks varied household needs and delivers limited environmental benefits compared with targeted transport reforms.

First, a uniform cap ignores differences in geography, employment and family structure. In suburban or rural areas with weak public transport, multiple cars may be essential for work, education and caregiving. A strict limit would reduce mobility and economic participation without guaranteeing fewer journeys, as families may still travel the same distances at peak times. Moreover, congestion is caused by road use, not ownership itself, so a second car parked at home does not necessarily worsen traffic.

Second, the environmental impact of such a restriction is uncertain and potentially inequitable. Wealthier households could retain newer, cleaner vehicles, while larger or lower-income families would bear disproportionate inconvenience. In contrast, policies that price road use directly, such as congestion charging, low-emission zones and fuel taxation, discourage unnecessary trips and favour cleaner technology. For example, cities that combine reliable public transport with demand-based pricing have achieved measurable reductions in traffic and emissions without rigid ownership rules.

In conclusion, limiting families to one car is an inflexible and socially uneven measure. Effective congestion and pollution reduction requires policies that manage usage, expand alternatives and incentivise cleaner travel, rather than imposing a simplistic ownership cap.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay takes a clear stand against the one-car rule and explains why in depth. It states "I largely disagree with this approach because it is a blunt policy" and supports it with the example of "cities that combine reliable public transport with demand-based pricing". I largely disagree with this approach because it is a blunt policy that overlooks varied household needscities that combine reliable public transport with demand-based pricing
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe reasons follow a clear ordered plan with strong linkers. Words like "First", "Moreover", "Second", "In contrast", and "In conclusion" join the argument. First, a uniform capMoreover, congestion is causedSecond, the environmental impactIn contrast, policiesIn conclusion, limiting families
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses conditional and relative clauses with precision. The "as families may still travel..." clause and the "such as" list show varied structures. A strict limit would reduce mobility and economic participation without guaranteeing fewer journeys, as families may still travel the same distancespolicies that price road use directly, such as congestion charging
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentences are correct and easy to follow. The clause "so a second car parked at home does not necessarily worsen traffic" is well built. so a second car parked at home does not necessarily worsen traffic
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses accurate policy vocabulary and collocations. Phrases like "public transport", "low-emission zones", and "fuel taxation" show a broad range. public transportlow-emission zonesfuel taxationeconomic participation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. Words like "disproportionate" and "inequitable" are spelled correctly. disproportionateinequitable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 237 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body reasons, and a conclusion.
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