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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36435 Multinational companies 2
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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?
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The growing influence of multinational companies and their products across most countries is often criticised as damaging our quality of life. Clearly, I largely disagree with this view, as multinational corporations have generally improved living standards through economic development, consumer benefits, and technological progress, despite some legitimate concerns.

Firstly, the strongest benefit of these global companies is their contribution to economic growth and employment in host countries. For instance, by investing across borders, multinational businesses create jobs, develop skills, and transfer modern management methods to local labour markets. Moreover, these multinational manufacturers often provide stable wages and training that small domestic companies cannot match, which raises household income and social mobility. Consequently, these effects directly enhance quality of life by reducing poverty and expanding economic opportunity, so the trend is far from purely damaging.

In addition, multinational products frequently improve consumer welfare and everyday convenience for ordinary living. Specifically, global competition among companies encourages innovation, lowers prices, and increases product choice, from affordable electronics to reliable medicines and other quality goods. Admittedly, critics argue that local cultures and small businesses may be undermined as multinational brands expand, but this risk can be managed through regulation and support for domestic enterprises. However, access to high-quality global goods and services makes daily life more efficient and comfortable for most consumers across many countries.

Therefore, although multinational companies can create challenges, this trend does not seriously damage our quality of life. Ultimately, on balance the economic contribution, innovation, and consumer benefits of these corporations outweigh the disadvantages, particularly when governments implement effective policies to guide the impact of global business on living standards.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay disagrees that global firms damage life and states this clearly. It supports the view with an example about jobs and skills. I largely disagree with this view, as multinational corporations have generally improved living standardsmultinational businesses create jobs, develop skills, and transfer modern management methods
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses clear linking words to open ideas and show contrast. They keep the argument well ordered. FirstlyMoreoverIn additionAdmittedlyTherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses reason and concession clauses with ease. The examples below show complex control. by investing across borders, multinational businesses create jobsthis risk can be managed through regulation and support for domestic enterprises
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe sentence below shows correct complex grammar with a clear result. It is accurate. these effects directly enhance quality of life by reducing poverty and expanding economic opportunity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and pairings on this topic. They sound academic and exact. economic developmentconsumer welfaresocial mobilityproduct choice
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling stays correct across the essay. Both words below are spelled well. corporationsinnovation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 270 words, which is in the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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