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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36434 Advances in health
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Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Advances in medicine, biology, and social organisation over the last 100 years have profoundly transformed daily life and postponed the day we die. While modern society faces new risks and inequalities, I largely agree that the present offers unprecedented opportunities for health, security, and fulfilment compared with any earlier period. Clearly, no previous generation enjoyed the scientific advances that now shape human life.

Firstly, the strongest reason is the dramatic improvement in health outcomes driven by rapid scientific progress. For instance, vaccination, antibiotics, and advanced diagnostics in biology have reduced infant mortality and turned once-fatal diseases into manageable conditions. Consequently, people not only postpone death and live longer but also remain productive for more years, allowing education, careers, and family life to develop with far greater stability. Moreover, technology and medicine have transformed communication, work, and access to knowledge across society.

Admittedly, critics argue that contemporary life brings stress, environmental damage, and chronic illness, which undermine the claim that this is the best time to be alive. However, these challenges are increasingly recognised and addressed through public health policy, biomedical science, and social awareness. Specifically, compared with past generations who lacked effective treatment or social protection, modern populations retain far greater capacity to respond to such threats to life and health.

Therefore, despite the genuine problems of modern society, the balance of evidence strongly supports the view that there has never been a better time to be alive in terms of health and life expectancy. Ultimately, extended life expectancy, improved quality of life, and the resilience produced by a century of advances in health and biology outweigh the disadvantages in today's society.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay agrees that now is the best time to be alive and answers the prompt fully. It supports this with health examples. the present offers unprecedented opportunities for health, security, and fulfilmentvaccination, antibiotics, and advanced diagnostics in biology have reduced infant mortality
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay opens each idea with clear linking words. They guide the reader from point to point. FirstlyFor instanceMoreoverAdmittedlyTherefore
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses concession and result clauses with ease. The examples below show longer structures. While modern society faces new risks and inequalities, I largely agreethese challenges are increasingly recognised and addressed through public health policy
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe sentence below shows correct complex grammar with a clear result clause. It reads smoothly. people not only postpone death and live longer but also remain productive for more years
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and pairings. They fit the topic on progress well. social organisationhealth outcomesinfant mortalitylife expectancy
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct, with the British forms below. Both words are spelled well. organisationrecognised
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 272 words, which is in the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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