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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36163 British and Australian
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Under British and Australian laws jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

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Under British and Australian laws jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
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Under British and Australian criminal procedure, juries are shielded from a defendant's prior convictions to ensure impartial verdicts. I disagree with proposals to disclose full criminal histories, because such information would distort fact-finding and undermine the presumption of innocence. Decisions should rest on evidence of the charged offence, not character judgements derived from the past.

First, knowledge of previous offences creates a powerful risk of prejudice. Jurors may unconsciously infer guilt from patterns, lowering the standard of proof and encouraging propensity reasoning. For example, awareness of earlier thefts could sway interpretation of ambiguous evidence in a burglary trial, leading to convictions based on reputation rather than reliable testimony.

Second, fairness is already protected through controlled mechanisms that balance relevance and justice. Judges can admit limited prior facts when directly probative, such as to establish intent or rebut coincidence, while excluding material that merely inflames bias. Expanding disclosure to juries would weaken these safeguards and invite appeals over unfair trials.

Overall, withholding criminal records better secures impartial deliberation and public confidence in verdicts. While past behaviour can be relevant in narrow circumstances, routine disclosure would prejudice decision-making and erode the presumption of innocence. Therefore, the current practice should be retained, with judicial discretion providing the necessary balance.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and supports it with a concrete example. The burglary trial example shows the risk of prejudice well. I disagree with proposals to disclose full criminal historiesawareness of earlier thefts could sway interpretation of ambiguous evidence in a burglary trial
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs open with clear ordering and result connectors. These linkers keep the argument organised. First, knowledge of previous offencesFor example, awareness of earlier theftsSecond, fairness is already protectedOverall, withholding criminal records
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with time and contrast clauses smoothly. The ideas stay clear and precise. Jurors may unconsciously infer guilt from patterns, lowering the standard of proofwhile excluding material that merely inflames bias
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a relative clause accurately with correct verb forms. The grammar is well controlled. Judges can admit limited prior facts when directly probative
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and legal pairings. These choices show a wide vocabulary. impartial verdictspresumption of innocencepropensity reasoningjudicial discretion
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. These words are written accurately. defendant'sdeliberation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 206 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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