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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36162 Cards and repay
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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this? Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this? Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
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Rising personal debt driven by credit cards and unsecured loans has raised concern about the financial welfare of many people. Some argue that borrowing large amounts of money should be made more difficult, while others warn against limiting individuals' access to credit. Clearly, I contend that stricter safeguards on personal borrowing are justified, provided they are targeted rather than blanket bans.

Firstly, supporters of tighter controls emphasise that easy credit encourages people to overspend and masks affordability problems in personal finance. For instance, when credit limits are high and repayment checks are weak, individuals accumulate interest-heavy debts that trap them in long-term repayment. Moreover, repeated minimum payments on credit cards can quickly escalate modest purchases into unmanageable debt, increasing defaults and wider social costs for people.

Admittedly, opponents respond that restricting borrowing penalises responsible individuals and small entrepreneurs who rely on loans to make income predictable or to invest. Specifically, credit can fund education, emergencies, or business expansion, yielding long-term benefits that outweigh the money borrowed. However, this argument is weaker without robust screening, since smarter banking regulation can preserve access by linking each loan to income, essential expenses, and repayment history.

Therefore, while credit plays a legitimate economic role, unchecked borrowing magnifies the personal and societal risk of debt. Consequently, making it more difficult for individuals to borrow very large sums through targeted affordability checks and sensible caps on cards is reasonable. Ultimately, such measures deter harmful personal debt while maintaining fair access to money for prudent borrowers who genuinely need credit and can manage steady repayment.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion with a condition and supports it with an example. The point about minimum payments shows how debt grows. I contend that stricter safeguards on personal borrowing are justifiedrepeated minimum payments on credit cards can quickly escalate modest purchases into unmanageable debt
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs open with clear connectors that order and contrast the points. These linkers guide the reader clearly. Firstly, supporters of tighter controlsAdmittedly, opponents respondHowever, this argument is weakerTherefore, while credit playsUltimately, such measures deter
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with time and reason clauses smoothly. The meaning stays clear. when credit limits are high and repayment checks are weak, individuals accumulate interest-heavy debtssince smarter banking regulation can preserve access by linking each loan to income
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence handles a relative clause and comparison accurately. The grammar is controlled and clear. yielding long-term benefits that outweigh the money borrowed
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and topic pairings. These choices show a broad vocabulary. unsecured loansaffordability problemswider social costssensible caps on cards
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct, including the British form. These words are written accurately. emphasisepredictable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 258 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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