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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36049 Air traffic
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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?
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Rising air traffic has intensified noise, emissions and pressure for new airports, largely driven by the expansion of low-cost flights to leisure destinations. I agree that governments should restrain this growth through heavier taxation, provided it is targeted and proportionate, because market prices currently understate the environmental and social costs of flying.

First, higher taxes help to account properly for externalities by reflecting pollution, noise disturbance and land use in ticket prices. When fares rise modestly, discretionary holiday travel becomes less frequent, airlines deploy fuller aircraft, and marginal routes are reconsidered. For example, a surcharge on short-haul leisure flights would encourage travellers to choose rail or closer destinations, reducing emissions without banning mobility or essential journeys.

Second, taxation helps correct distortions created by low-cost business models that rely on minimal fares and rapid airport expansion. Critics argue that higher charges harm consumers and tourism; however, carefully designed levies can be paired with exemptions for essential travel and reinvestment in cleaner aviation technology. Such measures protect access while signalling that unchecked airport construction and persistent aircraft noise impose unacceptable public burdens on local communities.

Overall, heavier taxation is a justified and effective tool to reduce excessive air traffic linked to low-cost holidays. By pricing environmental harm more accurately and shaping airline behaviour, governments can limit pollution, noise and airport growth while preserving necessary national and international connectivity.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion with a condition and gives a concrete example. The short-haul surcharge point supports the view well. I agree that governments should restrain this growth through heavier taxationa surcharge on short-haul leisure flights would encourage travellers to choose rail
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs open with clear ordering and result connectors. These linkers keep the argument well structured. First, higher taxesFor example, a surchargeSecond, taxation helpsOverall, heavier taxation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with reason and time clauses smoothly. The ideas stay clear and precise. because market prices currently understate the environmental and social costs of flyingWhen fares rise modestly, discretionary holiday travel becomes less frequent
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a concessive structure accurately with a clear balance. The grammar is well controlled. Critics argue that higher charges harm consumers and tourism; however, carefully designed levies can be paired with exemptions
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong pairings. These choices show a wide vocabulary. account properly for externalitiesnoise disturbancemarginal routes are reconsideredcleaner aviation technology
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. These words are written accurately. emissionsproportionate
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 226 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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