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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35605 Traditional cultures
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Some people think traditional cultures should be strictly followed, while others think modern people should adopt a new way of life. What is your opinion?

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Some people think traditional cultures should be strictly followed, while others think modern people should adopt a new way of life. What is your opinion?
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A debate persists over whether societies should strictly preserve traditional cultures or embrace modern ways of living. While tradition provides identity and continuity, I believe modern people should adapt new practises selectively, integrating them with inherited values rather than following customs rigidly.

Rigid adherence to tradition can restrict social progress and individual opportunity. Norms formed in agrarian or patriarchal contexts may conflict with contemporary realities such as urbanisation, gender equality, and a knowledge economy. For example, unquestioned obedience to elders or fixed career expectations can limit educational choices and innovation. Adopting modern lifestyles enables people to respond effectively to technological change and global interaction, thereby improving productivity and personal freedom.

Admittedly, abandoning tradition entirely risks cultural erosion and social fragmentation. Customs, languages, and rituals transmit ethical frameworks and a sense of communal belonging that modern life often lacks. However, preservation is most effective when traditions are allowed to evolve. Festivals can be maintained through modern organisation, and moral principles such as respect and responsibility can guide behaviour without enforcing outdated rules. This adaptive approach safeguards cultural heritage while remaining socially relevant.

In conclusion, tradition should inform rather than imprison contemporary life. By selectively adopting modern ways while retaining core cultural values, societies can achieve continuity alongside progress. Such a balanced approach allows cultures to remain meaningful, resilient, and capable of meeting present and future challenges.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a balanced but clear opinion about blending tradition and modern life. A concrete example about obedience to elders supports the idea. I believe modern people should adapt new practises selectivelyunquestioned obedience to elders or fixed career expectations can limit educational choices
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised and flows smoothly. Clear linkers open each new idea. For example, unquestioned obedienceAdmittedly, abandoning tradition entirelyHowever, preservation is most effectiveIn conclusion, tradition should inform
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses varied and precise sentence forms. The example below joins contrast and result in one smooth sentence. Adopting modern lifestyles enables people to respond effectively to technological change and global interaction, thereby improving productivity and personal freedompreservation is most effective when traditions are allowed to evolve
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex sentences are grammatically sound and hard to fault. Customs, languages, and rituals transmit ethical frameworks and a sense of communal belonging
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic vocabulary and strong collocations. social progresscultural erosionsocial fragmentationcultural heritage
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including British forms like urbanisation. urbanisationpatriarchal
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 225 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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