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Students should spend the same amount of time doing exercises as they allocate to studying. Do you agree or disagree with it?

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Students should spend the same amount of time doing exercises as they allocate to studying. Do you agree or disagree with it?
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Whether students should devote the same amount of time to academic study and physical exercise is increasingly debated in education. I agree that equal allocation is beneficial, because learning quality depends on health as well as intellectual effort. A balanced schedule recognises students as cognitive and physical individuals rather than narrow examination performers. This approach supports both achievement and wellbeing.

Regular exercise directly enhances academic performance through improved concentration, memory retention, and stress management. Physical activity increases blood circulation to the brain, which sustains attention during extended study periods. For instance, students who maintain consistent exercise routines often demonstrate sharper focus and calmer responses before examinations. When exercise time matches study time, these cognitive advantages become habitual, supporting steady productivity throughout the academic year.

Critics argue that demanding curricula make equal time allocation impractical, particularly in competitive courses. Nevertheless, prolonged studying without physical movement frequently results in exhaustion, sleep disruption, and declining efficiency. When students substitute marginal revision hours with exercise, overall learning improves despite fewer hours at a desk. Equal time allocation therefore improves academic outcomes by encouraging effective study habits and preserving long-term mental stamina.

In conclusion, I strongly support the view that students should spend as much time exercising as studying. Such balance strengthens cognitive performance, emotional stability, and sustainable learning practises. Educational environments that promote this equilibrium are more likely to develop healthy, motivated, and consistently successful graduates.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly agrees that study and exercise time should be equal. A concrete example about exercise routines supports the point. I agree that equal allocation is beneficialstudents who maintain consistent exercise routines often demonstrate sharper focus
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay moves in a clear, logical order. Linking words at the start of ideas guide the reader smoothly. For instance, students who maintainWhen exercise time matches study timeNevertheless, prolonged studyingEqual time allocation therefore improvesIn conclusion, I strongly support
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles long sentences with ease and precision. The relative clause below adds detail without breaking the flow. Physical activity increases blood circulation to the brain, which sustains attention during extended study periodsWhen students substitute marginal revision hours with exercise, overall learning improves
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is used correctly. The conditional-style clause below is accurate and clear. these cognitive advantages become habitual, supporting steady productivity
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a broad academic word range with strong collocations. memory retentionstress managementemotional stabilitylong-term mental stamina
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including British forms like recognises. recognisesconcentration
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 232 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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