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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35534 Quality of life
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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?
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The growing influence of multinational companies and their products is often criticised as harmful to quality of life. However, I largely disagree with this view, as multinational enterprises have generally improved living standards through economic development, consumer benefits, and technological progress, despite some legitimate concerns.

The strongest benefit of multinational companies is their contribution to economic growth and employment. By investing across borders, they create jobs, develop skills, and transfer modern management practises to local labour markets. For example, international manufacturers often provide stable wages and training that are unavailable in small domestic firms, which raises household income and social mobility. These effects directly enhance quality of life by reducing poverty and expanding economic opportunities.

In addition, multinational products frequently improve consumer welfare and everyday convenience. Global competition encourages innovation, lowers prices, and increases product choice, from affordable electronics to reliable medicines. Critics argue that local cultures and small businesses may be undermined, but this risk can be managed through regulation and support for domestic enterprises. Overall, access to high-quality global goods and services makes daily life more efficient and comfortable for most consumers.

In conclusion, although multinational companies can create challenges, they do not seriously damage the quality of life. On balance, their economic contributions, innovation, and consumer benefits outweigh the disadvantages, particularly when governments implement effective policies to guide their impact.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear view that multinationals do not seriously harm quality of life, and supports it with a concrete example about wages and training. This answers the prompt in depth. I largely disagree with this viewinternational manufacturers often provide stable wages and training
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear linking words at the start of sentences to show examples, addition, and result. These give the essay a smooth structure. For exampleIn additionCritics argue thatOverallIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with concessive and relative clauses that read with ease. The meaning is always clear. By investing across borders, they create jobs, develop skills, and transfer modern management practisesalthough multinational companies can create challenges, they do not seriously damage
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence handles a list of results with correct grammar. The structure is accurate throughout. Global competition encourages innovation, lowers prices, and increases product choice
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs. These show a broad lexical range. living standardssocial mobilityconsumer welfareeffective policies
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay, including the British form of this word. There are no spelling errors. criticisedmanagement practises
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 223 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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