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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35401 Female students
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Calls for universities to enrol equal numbers of men and women in every discipline stem from concerns about fairness and representation. However, I largely disagree with enforcing strict gender parity across all subjects. While widening access is essential, mandatory quotas risk undermining academic freedom and overlooking genuine differences in interests, academic preparation, and labour market pathways.

The strongest objection is that fixed ratios prioritise gender over merit and suitability. In competitive fields such as medicine or engineering, admission should reflect ability and preparedness rather than numerical targets. If applicants are filtered to satisfy quotas, universities may either exclude capable candidates or admit those who are inadequately prepared, which may lower academic standards and place pressure on learning environments, ultimately weakening graduates' professional credibility.

Supporters argue that equal intake would correct historical imbalance and challenge entrenched stereotypes, a concern that deserves recognition. Yet participation gaps often emerge much earlier through schooling quality, social expectations, and perceived career incentives, not admissions bias alone. Addressing outreach, mentoring, and financial support before university is therefore more effective than imposing uniform parity at entry, which treats symptoms rather than underlying causes.

Overall, universities should promote gender equity through inclusive and evidence-based policies without mandating identical numbers in every subject. Flexible admissions, transparent criteria, and early pipeline interventions respect academic standards while expanding opportunity. For these reasons, I disagree to a large extent with compulsory gender parity, favouring targeted measures that respond to context and long-term outcomes.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear view against strict gender quotas and supports it with a concrete example about medicine and engineering. This answers the prompt with depth. I largely disagree with enforcing strict gender parity across all subjectsIn competitive fields such as medicine or engineering, admission should reflect ability
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer opens paragraphs with clear linking phrases that show contrast and conclusion. These give the essay a smooth flow. The strongest objection isSupporters argue thatYetOverallFor these reasons
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with conditional and relative clauses that read with ease. The meaning is always clear. If applicants are filtered to satisfy quotas, universities may either exclude capable candidateswhich treats symptoms rather than underlying causes
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis concessive sentence handles a difficult structure with no mistakes. The grammar control is consistent. While widening access is essential, mandatory quotas risk undermining academic freedom
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. These show a broad lexical range. gender parityentrenched stereotypespipeline interventionstransparent criteria
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay. No words are misspelled. disagreeinadequately
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 241 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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