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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #34616 Protection of wild animals
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Protection of wild animals is a waste of resources. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to preserve these animals is wastage of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Protection of wild animals is a waste of resources. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to preserve these animals is wastage of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Claims that the protection of wild animals wastes resources ignore the ecological realities of the 21st century, and I strongly disagree with this view about wild fauna. Although human development is accelerating, wildlife conservation remains an essential effort rather than an obsolete or wasteful use of resources. The protection of wild creatures underpins environmental stability and long-term human welfare across every region and generation.

Firstly, wild animals are integral to the functioning ecosystems that support national economies, so their conservation is a rational investment rather than a waste of scarce resources. For example, declining wild predator populations can trigger overgrazing, soil deterioration and reduced agricultural output, imposing costs that far exceed any preservation spending. Consequently, investing in the protection of fauna prevents larger economic losses and long-term damage that would otherwise burden governments and future generations.

Admittedly, opponents argue that limited public resources should prioritise healthcare over wildlife protection, yet this presents a false choice about conservation. However, protecting wild habitats secures clean water, reduces disaster risks and sustains responsible tourism, which directly supports community income and cultural value. Indeed, in many regions the preservation of wild animals reinforces the historical and cultural identity of a place while resisting pollution that threatens human sustenance. Therefore, treating the conservation of wild creatures as outdated is misguided, because such efforts protect the very resources on which people depend.

In conclusion, the preservation of wild fauna is not a waste but an increasingly vital investment as environmental pressures intensify. Ultimately, wildlife protection safeguards ecosystem services, cultural heritage and human survival throughout the 21st century.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion in "I strongly disagree with this view about wild fauna" and supports it with the example "declining wild predator populations can trigger overgrazing, soil deterioration and reduced agricultural output". I strongly disagree with this view about wild faunadeclining wild predator populations can trigger overgrazing, soil deterioration and reduced agricultural output
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with linkers like "Firstly", "For example", "However", and "In conclusion". They join the ideas smoothly. FirstlyFor exampleHoweverThereforeIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex structures with ease. The clause "so their conservation is a rational investment rather than a waste of scarce resources" shows good control. so their conservation is a rational investment rather than a waste of scarce resourcesAlthough human development is accelerating
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence "opponents argue that limited public resources should prioritise healthcare over wildlife protection" is accurate and difficult to fault. opponents argue that limited public resources should prioritise healthcare over wildlife protection
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and collocations like "ecological realities" and "functioning ecosystems". ecological realitiesfunctioning ecosystemsecosystem services, cultural heritage and human survival
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form "prioritise" and the word "conservation". prioritiseconservation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 261 words and is a clear multi-paragraph essay with an introduction, developed body, and a conclusion.
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