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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #34617 Luck
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When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

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When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
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The quotation claims that success results solely from hard work and excludes any role for luck. I disagree with this absolute view. While sustained effort and discipline are essential foundations of achievement, favourable circumstances and chance opportunities often interact with hard work to determine final outcomes.

Hard work is undeniably central because it builds skills, resilience, and consistency. Individuals who practise deliberately, manage their time effectively, and persist despite setbacks are more likely to reach high levels of performance. For example, a student who studies systematically and seeks feedback usually attains stronger academic results than one who relies on talent alone. Effort also increases readiness, meaning that people are capable of recognising and using opportunities when they arise. Without preparation, chance events rarely translate into lasting success.

However, denying the influence of luck ignores social, economic, and situational factors that individuals do not control. Access to quality education, supportive networks, or being noticed at a critical moment can accelerate progress significantly. Two equally hardworking entrepreneurs may experience very different outcomes if one encounters an investor at the right time while the other faces an economic downturn. In such cases, success reflects not only effort but also timing and external conditions that shape possibilities.

In conclusion, success is best understood as the result of hard work combined with elements of luck. Effort creates the capacity to succeed, but chance often determines the speed, scale, and direction of achievement. Ignoring either factor presents an incomplete and unrealistic explanation of success.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion in "I disagree with this absolute view" and supports it with the example of "a student who studies systematically and seeks feedback". I disagree with this absolute viewa student who studies systematically and seeks feedback
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with linkers like "For example", "However", "In such cases", and "In conclusion". They guide the reader clearly. For exampleHoweverIn such casesIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses varied complex sentences. The clause "Two equally hardworking entrepreneurs may experience very different outcomes if one encounters an investor at the right time" shows precise control. Two equally hardworking entrepreneurs may experience very different outcomes if one encounters an investor at the right timemeaning that people are capable of recognising and using opportunities when they arise
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence "denying the influence of luck ignores social, economic, and situational factors that individuals do not control" is accurate and well formed. denying the influence of luck ignores social, economic, and situational factors that individuals do not control
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and collocations like "builds skills, resilience, and consistency" and "an economic downturn". builds skills, resilience, and consistencyan economic downturnpractise deliberately
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the words "resilience" and "circumstances". resiliencecircumstances
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 248 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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