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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33677 Money
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Money is the only single factor by which a person can buy happiness. How far you agree with this fact.

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Money is the only single factor by which a person can buy happiness. How far you agree with this fact.
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The claim that money alone determines happiness oversimplifies a complex human experience. While financial resources can remove hardship and expand choice, happiness arises from multiple interacting factors. I largely disagree that wealth is the single decisive element, because emotional, social, and psychological dimensions play an independent and lasting role.

Money undeniably contributes to wellbeing by meeting basic needs and reducing chronic stress. Adequate income secures housing, healthcare, and education, which create stability and autonomy. For example, financial security allows individuals to plan long term and avoid constant anxiety about survival, conditions that support positive mental health and life satisfaction.

However, beyond a reasonable standard of living, additional income delivers diminishing returns to happiness. Strong relationships, meaningful work, and a sense of purpose consistently shape fulfilment regardless of wealth. A highly paid employee experiencing isolation or burnout may feel less content than a modest earner with supportive family ties and engaging work, demonstrating that non-material factors can outweigh income.

In conclusion, money is an important enabling factor but not a sufficient or exclusive source of happiness. It alleviates deprivation, yet enduring contentment depends on social connection, purpose, and mental balance. Therefore, happiness is best understood as a multidimensional outcome rather than a commodity that can simply be purchased.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay takes a clear position that money alone cannot buy happiness. It backs this up with a strong example comparing a rich lonely worker with a modest earner. I largely disagree that wealth is the single decisive elementA highly paid employee experiencing isolation or burnout may feel less content than a modest earner
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas are sequenced logically and each paragraph opens with a clear signpost. The connectors make the contrast easy to follow. While financial resourcesFor exampleHowever, beyond a reasonable standardThereforeIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles varied structures with ease, including a clause that names the effect. Meaning is fully clear. beyond a reasonable standard of living, additional income delivers diminishing returns to happinessconditions that support positive mental health and life satisfaction
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex language is consistently accurate and hard to fault. This relative clause is joined correctly. Adequate income secures housing, healthcare, and education, which create stability and autonomy
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itA broad academic vocabulary is used with precision and natural pairings. These phrases show real command. chronic stressmeaningful workenduring contentmentmultidimensional outcome
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including these longer words. psychologicalfulfilment
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 207 words, which falls within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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