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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33678 criminals
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Many criminals re-offend after they are released from the prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions would you suggest?

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Many criminals re-offend after they are released from the prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions would you suggest?
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Many criminals reoffend soon after their release from prison, and the deep causes of recidivism deserve honest analysis.

The first cause is a criminal record that blocks steady employment, trapping the freed offender inside poverty, homelessness, and daily insecurity. Furthermore, thin rehabilitation behind prison walls leaves each offender without the education, vocational training, and confidence that today's labour market plainly rewards. Consequently, the released criminal drifts toward familiar violence, and that hostile environment quietly reproduces the original crime. Moreover, social stigma shadows every offender, and such discrimination corrodes the family bonds and community networks that normally deter crime. However, absent mental health treatment and addiction counselling remain equally powerful causes that drive reoffending, and untreated offenders relapse fast.

Therefore, any credible solution must dismantle each cause of crime rather than merely punishing the isolated criminal. Firstly, government ministers and justice stakeholders should finance rehabilitation programmes delivering education, apprenticeships, mentorship, and disciplined structure to the offender. Secondly, a thoughtful reentry policy ought to guarantee the released criminal housing, employment guidance, and continuous counselling. In addition, patient community integration dissolves the stigma pushing offenders backward, while early intervention prevents that damaging first offence entirely. Ultimately, this reform defines a central debate of the twenty-first century, because society and government share one argument that prevention outperforms prison.

In conclusion, the durable solution to reoffending fuses rehabilitation, generous reentry support, and genuine social integration, ensuring the released criminal never revisits serious crime.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay clearly explains why criminals reoffend and offers concrete solutions. It names a main cause and then a specific policy example to fix it. The first cause is a criminal record that blocks steady employmentgovernment ministers and justice stakeholders should finance rehabilitation programmes delivering education, apprenticeships, mentorship
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe argument flows through many clear linkers that connect causes and solutions. They keep the order easy to follow. FurthermoreConsequentlyMoreoverFirstlySecondlyIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses varied and precise sentences, including one with a linking result clause. The meaning is always clear. thin rehabilitation behind prison walls leaves each offender without the education, vocational training, and confidenceany credible solution must dismantle each cause of crime rather than merely punishing the isolated criminal
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex sentences are built accurately and errors are rare. This relative clause fits smoothly. a criminal record that blocks steady employment, trapping the freed offender inside poverty
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. These choices sound confident and exact. recidivismsocial stigmaaddiction counsellingreentry policy
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British-style word and these longer words. labourdiscrimination
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 238 words, which is within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay covering causes, solutions, and a conclusion.
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