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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33294 good parent
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Some people think it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Some people think it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
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Many argue that parenting is a private matter learnt through experience, yet I agree that schools should teach all young people to be good parents. Early education can prepare future adults for responsibilities that influence children's welfare and wider society. Such instruction will complement, rather than replace, family learning and informal guidance.

The strongest reason is prevention. Many parenting failures arise from ignorance about child development, communication, and emotional needs. If schools provide structured guidance before adulthood, young people can avoid harmful practises later. For example, understanding the manner in which stress affects a child's behaviour can reduce neglectful or aggressive responses, leading to healthier family environments and lower long-term social costs.

Another reason is that effective parenting relies on teachable skills, not instinct alone. A good parent needs emotional regulation, empathy, and patience to respond calmly to challenges. They also require practical abilities such as setting boundaries, managing time, and collaborating with caregivers and schools. Lessons on positive discipline, basic health, and digital safety will equip future parents to guide children responsibly in modern contexts. Critics claim such teaching is premature, but foundational skills remain relevant even before parenthood.

In conclusion, schools should educate young people about good parenting because the benefits extend beyond individual families to society as a whole. By teaching emotional, communicative, and practical skills early, education systems can foster more capable parents and more secure children.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion in their own words and supports it with a real example. The point about stress and behaviour develops the argument well. I agree that schools should teach all young people to be good parentsunderstanding the manner in which stress affects a child's behaviour
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised and uses clear signposts for each reason. These linkers make the structure easy to follow. The strongest reason is preventionFor exampleAnother reasonCritics claimIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a conditional clause and a participle phrase. The meaning is clear. If schools provide structured guidance before adulthoodleading to healthier family environments and lower long-term social costs
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is controlled and accurate. This verb phrase links several objects correctly. setting boundaries, managing time, and collaborating with caregivers
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These phrases show a strong vocabulary. child developmentemotional regulationpositive disciplinedigital safety
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. These words are written accurately. practisesempathy
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 231 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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