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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33285 public open space
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Some people believe that at cities and towns should have at least one large public open space. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that at cities and towns should have at least one large public open space. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Urban growth has intensified debates about land allocation within cities and towns. I strongly agree that every urban area should include at least one large public open space. Such spaces are not a luxury but a core element of liveable settlements, supporting social wellbeing, environmental quality, and long-term urban resilience.

Firstly, a substantial open space provides social and health benefits that smaller neighbourhood parks cannot easily deliver. Large green areas enable walking, organised sport, and community events, encouraging regular physical activity and informal interaction among diverse residents. For example, central parks often act as shared venues for festivals, exercise, and leisure, strengthening social cohesion and contributing to better mental health and lower stress levels.

Moreover, major public open spaces play an essential environmental role in dense urban settings. They reduce air pollution, moderate extreme temperatures, and absorb rainwater, which lowers the risk of surface flooding. Although critics argue that valuable land should be prioritised for housing or commerce, reserving one large green area ultimately protects infrastructure and enhances urban sustainability and climate resilience.

In conclusion, I firmly support the view that every city or town should set aside land for a large public open space. The combined social, health, and environmental benefits clearly outweigh competing land uses. Ensuring access to a substantial shared green area is therefore a responsible priority in contemporary urban planning.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a firm opinion in their own words and supports it with a clear example. The point about central parks makes the argument convincing. I strongly agree that every urban area should include at least one large public open spacecentral parks often act as shared venues for festivals, exercise, and leisure
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised and each paragraph opens with a clear linker. These devices make the argument easy to follow. FirstlyMoreoverAlthough critics argueIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a variety of complex sentences, including a relative clause and a concessive clause. The language is precise and clear. which lowers the risk of surface floodingAlthough critics argue that valuable land should be prioritised for housing or commerce
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is used with full control. This long verb phrase joins several ideas correctly. enable walking, organised sport, and community events
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a rich lexical range with strong collocations. These academic phrases are used accurately. long-term urban resiliencestrengthening social cohesionmoderate extreme temperaturescontemporary urban planning
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. These words are written without error. liveableneighbourhood
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 224 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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