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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32049 Building modern housing
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More and more countries spend large amount of money on the restoration of buildings instead of on modern housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this analysis? Support your writing with your experience and/or examples.

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More and more countries spend large amount of money on the restoration of buildings instead of on modern housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this analysis? Support your writing with your experience and/or examples.
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Many countries increasingly allocate large amounts of money to restoring historic buildings rather than expanding modern housing. I largely disagree that this priority is appropriate, because acute housing shortages require far greater expenditure on functional and affordable contemporary homes, even though limited restoration can still have cultural value.

The strongest argument against heavy spending on building restoration is the urgent need for modern housing in rapidly growing nations. Population growth, urbanisation, and smaller household sizes have intensified pressure on housing supply, pushing prices beyond the reach of many residents. Directing money towards new apartments, modern structures, and energy-saving renovation designs can immediately improve living standards across countries dealing with real affordability challenges. For example, social housing projects provide safe homes for disadvantaged households and reduce overcrowding, producing clear social returns that restored monuments rarely deliver.

Supporters claim that restoring heritage buildings preserves national identity and attracts tourism revenue for the economy. Although this benefit exists in some nations, it is often overstated and the money spent on restoration is unevenly distributed. Many repaired structures serve limited purposes, such as museums or administrative offices, and do little to address daily housing needs. Furthermore, converting selected historic buildings into modern residences offers a compromise that balances heritage with contemporary housing demands, rather than prioritising costly cosmetic renovation over practical use.

In conclusion, while conserving culturally significant buildings has some merit, excessive expenditure on restoration at the expense of modern housing is misguided. Governments should prioritise expanding affordable housing while preserving heritage selectively.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and explains it well. The writer says heavy spending on restoration is wrong when housing is short, and supports this with the social housing example. I largely disagree that this priority is appropriatesocial housing projects provide safe homes for disadvantaged households
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas move smoothly from one paragraph to the next. Words like these link and guide the reader through the argument. For exampleAlthough this benefit existsFurthermoreIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses and still keeps the meaning clear. This shows control of complex language. even though limited restoration can still have cultural valueconverting selected historic buildings into modern residences offers a compromise
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence joins several ideas correctly with no mistakes. The grammar stays accurate in a complex form. have intensified pressure on housing supply, pushing prices beyond the reach
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses strong topic words and natural word pairs. These fit the subject of housing and heritage well. acute housing shortagesurbanisationcosmetic renovationculturally significant buildings
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including the British form of the first word here. prioritisingaffordable
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 250 words and a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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