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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32050 Children 21st century
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It is getting harder for children to live and grow in the 21st century than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is getting harder for children to live and grow in the 21st century than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
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Compared with earlier generations, many children today grow up in a more demanding environment shaped by rapid technological change and heightened social expectations. I agree that living and developing in the 21st century is harder overall, because risks to wellbeing have increased while traditional sources of protection have weakened.

A central challenge is the digital landscape, which exposes children to constant comparison, cyberbullying, and excessive screen use. Unlike earlier, limited media, social platforms penetrate the home and daily routine, disturbing sleep, concentration, and self-esteem. Online harassment can spread instantly and remain visible for years, generating stress that schools and families find difficult to contain, thereby harming emotional resilience during crucial stages of development.

Another difficulty arises from intensified academic competition and economic pressure on families. Education systems increasingly emphasise early achievement and continual testing, while insecure employment and rising living costs reduce parental time and stability. Although modern healthcare and access to information are clear benefits, they do not offset anxiety caused by examinations, reduced unstructured play, and uncertainty about future prospects.

In conclusion, despite undeniable technological and medical progress, contemporary childhood often involves heavier psychological and social burdens than before. Digital risks and intensified academic and economic pressures complicate healthy development. It is therefore reasonable to argue that, for many children, growing up in the 21st century is more difficult than it was in the past.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and develops it fully. They agree childhood is harder now and support this with the point about online harassment. I agree that living and developing in the 21st century is harder overallOnline harassment can spread instantly and remain visible for years
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised and easy to follow. Linking words open the paragraphs and connect the ideas clearly. A central challengeAnother difficulty arisesAlthough modern healthcareIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long, joined sentences with extra clauses and keeps them clear. This shows a good range of structures. which exposes children to constant comparison, cyberbullying, and excessive screen usegenerating stress that schools and families find difficult to contain
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a contrast structure correctly with no errors. The complex grammar is well controlled. they do not offset anxiety caused by examinations
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and natural phrases about modern life. These fit the topic of childhood pressure well. heightened social expectationsdigital landscapeemotional resilienceinsecure employment
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including the British form of the first word here. emphasisewellbeing
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 227 words and a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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