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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32039 Credit Cards
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There are more and more situations where credit cards are used instead of cash. The idea of a cashless society seems to be becoming more of a reality. How realistic do you think it is? What do you see as the potential benefits or problems?

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There are more and more situations where credit cards are used instead of cash. The idea of a cashless society seems to be becoming more of a reality. How realistic do you think it is? What do you see as the potential benefits or problems?
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Electronic payments are increasingly replacing notes and coins, leading some to predict a fully cashless society. While this transition is plausible in advanced economies, it is unlikely to be universal in the near future. Nonetheless, the spread of credit cards and digital wallets brings clear efficiencies alongside serious social and technical risks.

One major benefit of reduced cash use is convenience and efficiency for consumers and businesses. Card payments are fast, traceable, and compatible with online commerce, lowering transaction costs and reducing theft. For governments, digital records can limit tax evasion and support economic planning, as everyday spending becomes more transparent and easier to analyse.

However, a cashless society also creates significant problems that limit its realism. Older people, low-income groups, and those without stable internet access may be excluded from basic transactions. In addition, reliance on electronic systems increases vulnerability to cybercrime, power failures, and data misuse, meaning a single technical disruption can halt economic activity.

In conclusion, a largely cashless society is realistic only in specific contexts rather than as a global standard. Although electronic payments improve efficiency and transparency, cash remains essential for inclusion, resilience, and personal autonomy. A balanced system that preserves cash while expanding secure digital options is therefore the most practical path forward.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a balanced opinion that a cashless society is only realistic in some places, then supports it with a clear point about excluded groups. This gives strong, specific support. it is unlikely to be universal in the near futuremay be excluded from basic transactions
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas flow well between paragraphs. The linking words below guide the reader through benefits, problems, and the ending. NonethelessHoweverIn additionIn conclusionAlthough electronic payments improve efficiency
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The phrases below join ideas using contrast and give extra detail, and the meaning stays clear. While this transition is plausible in advanced economiesmeaning a single technical disruption can halt economic activity
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct construction that adds a reason to the main idea. as everyday spending becomes more transparent and easier to analyse
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and natural collocations. The phrases below are precise and fit the topic well. digital walletslowering transaction costslimit tax evasionvulnerability to cybercrime
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. Both words below are spelled well. efficienciesautonomy
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 209 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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