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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31071 Space travel B2
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Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues – such as environmental problems – that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?

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Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues – such as environmental problems – that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?
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Public enthusiasm for modern space travel is understandable. Yet governments face urgent choices about how limited public funding is distributed. While space exploration delivers scientific prestige and long-term knowledge, I believe the current priority of funding should tilt towards addressing environmental problems on Earth, with space programmes receiving more selective and clearly justified investment.

Firstly, environmental problems such as climate change, pollution and biodiversity loss pose immediate risks to health, food security and economic stability. Public funding can accelerate renewable energy, resilient infrastructure and conservation at a scale private markets rarely achieve. For example, investment in flood defences or clean transport delivers measurable benefits within years, directly protecting communities and reducing future public costs related to environmental issues.

Furthermore, space travel and exploration remain valuable for science, technology and innovation. Indeed, space research drives technological development that benefits society and the economy in the long term. However, these benefits are often indirect and long-term, and expensive space missions can crowd out urgent domestic environmental needs. Consequently, a balanced approach would fund space research that has clear environmental or technological spillovers, rather than prestige-driven projects with limited public return.

Admittedly, supporters of space travel argue that it inspires society and drives innovation, a claim that has merit and is widely shared among stakeholders and government budget planners. Moreover, exploration missions generate shared scientific knowledge and views that benefit society as a whole. However, focusing public funding on environmental problems now ensures a stable foundation from which ambitious exploration can be responsibly pursued later.

In conclusion, public funding should primarily confront environmental challenges threatening present and future wellbeing. Space exploration remains valuable, but it should be strategically constrained and aligned with societal needs and priorities in the twenty-first century.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear view on how public money should be split. It supports this with a specific example about flood defences and clean transport. the current priority of funding should tilt towards addressing environmental problems on Earthinvestment in flood defences or clean transport delivers measurable benefits within years
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linkers. These words connect each reason and counter-point in order. Firstly,Furthermore,Consequently,Admittedly,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with precision. The relative clause below explains the funded approach clearly. a balanced approach would fund space research that has clear environmental or technological spillovers
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is accurate throughout. This concessive clause with however joins the ideas well. these benefits are often indirect and long-term, and expensive space missions can crowd out urgent domestic environmental needs
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These fit the funding and environment topic well. scientific prestigebiodiversity lossresilient infrastructuretechnological spillovers
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. Both words below are spelled correctly. explorationprestige-driven
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 287 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
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