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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31072 Extreme Sports
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In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or adventure sports?

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In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or adventure sports?
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Extreme and adventure sports, including mountaineering and skydiving, have grown substantially in popularity as individuals seek intense physical challenges and unusual thrills. In my opinion, while these sports offer notable personal advantages, their disadvantages are considerable, and the risks generally outweigh the benefits for most participants in twenty-first century society.

The primary advantage of extreme sports lies in their capacity to build resilience, discipline, and self-confidence. Participants who engage in mountaineering or skydiving must assess risk carefully, plan with precision, and persevere under physical and psychological pressure. Importantly, the mental fortitude developed through such adventure sports often transfers meaningfully to professional and academic settings, supporting motivation and personal growth. Furthermore, the fitness benefits gained from regular participation in extreme sports activities are well-documented, reducing stress and improving overall health outcomes.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages of extreme sports are substantial and cannot be minimised. Despite advances in safety equipment, unpredictable mountain environments and human error remain constant threats, producing serious injury or fatal accidents with alarming regularity. Consequently, the argument that calculated risk in adventure sports is acceptable weakens considerably when individual accidents place disproportionate strain on healthcare systems and insurance infrastructure. Although some argue that the thrill and psychological benefit justify participation, this position overlooks the broader societal costs involved.

In conclusion, extreme and adventure sports can enhance character, motivation, and fitness, yet the risk of serious injury and the financial disadvantage to society mean that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits for the majority of participants.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that the risks outweigh the benefits. It supports both sides with specific points about mental fortitude and healthcare strain. the risks generally outweigh the benefits for most participantsthe mental fortitude developed through such adventure sports often transfers meaningfully to professional and academic settings
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows well with clear linkers. These words show addition, contrast, and result between the advantages and disadvantages. Importantly,Furthermore,Nevertheless,Consequently,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The concessive clause below balances the thrill against the wider costs. Although some argue that the thrill and psychological benefit justify participation, this position overlooks the broader societal costs
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is controlled well. This relative clause is joined accurately and reads naturally. Participants who engage in mountaineering or skydiving must assess risk carefully
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These suit the sports and risk topic well. intense physical challengesmental fortitudepersonal growthserious injury
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. Both words below are spelled correctly. mountaineeringpsychological
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 245 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
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