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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45441
Strategies to Stand Out in a Crowded Market core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your company is planning to enter a new market that is currently dominated by a few key players. Write an email to your business development manager suggesting three strategies to stand out in the crowded market and win over customers.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- A unique value proposition
- Targeted marketing campaigns
- Strong customer service and support
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Business Development Manager,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to enter the new market and stand out in this competitive space.
Firstly, focusing on a unique value proposition is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting targeted marketing campaigns is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing strong customer service and support is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Business Development Manager,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to enter the new market and stand out in this competitive space.
Firstly, focusing on a unique value proposition is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting targeted marketing campaigns is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing strong customer service and support is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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