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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45440
Gardening and Environmental Conservation core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
You are part of a local community garden group looking to engage more families and young people in gardening and environmental conservation. Write an email to Mr Green, the coordinator of the community garden, offering three suggestions on how the garden can become a more inviting and educational space for younger community members.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- Educational workshops
- Family-friendly gardening events
- Interactive environmental conservation projects
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Green,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to engage more families and young people in gardening and environmental conservation.
Firstly, focusing on educational workshops is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting family-friendly gardening events is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing interactive environmental conservation projects is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Mr Green,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to engage more families and young people in gardening and environmental conservation.
Firstly, focusing on educational workshops is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting family-friendly gardening events is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing interactive environmental conservation projects is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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