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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #768 Urbanisation R1
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People are moving from rural areas to big cities for better life. Is it good or bad?

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People are moving from rural areas to big cities for better life. Is it good or bad?
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Migration from rural areas to big cities is accelerating as people seek a better life through improved employment and services. In my opinion, while this movement creates visible pressures, migration from rural regions is largely beneficial for people and overall national development when supported by effective urban planning. Cities concentrate career opportunities, and rural-to-urban migration can reduce poverty rather than intensify it.

First, cities offer diverse employment markets and access to education and healthcare that are rarely available in remote rural areas. For example, young people relocating from villages to urban areas often gain vocational training and a stable career, and this relocation raises household income and social mobility. Consequently, these benefits lift productivity and tax revenue, which strengthens life across the wider urban economy.

Critics argue that rapid urban growth strains housing and transport and can hollow out rural towns. This concern is valid, but the problem lies in governance rather than in migration itself. Furthermore, investment in affordable housing and rural connectivity can absorb the people who move while enabling rural regions to specialise in modern agriculture and tourism.

Overall, migration to big cities brings more benefits than harm because it expands career opportunities and supports a better life for rural people. In my opinion, the negative effects of this urban movement are manageable through policy and planning, not through restricting migration. Ultimately, when cities and rural areas develop together, the migration of people becomes a driver of inclusive progress for society.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that moving to cities is mostly good and supports it with an example of young people gaining training and a career. This makes the answer full and specific. Migration from rural areas to big cities is accelerating as people seek a better lifeyoung people relocating from villages to urban areas often gain vocational training and a stable career
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear order words and linkers open the paragraphs and connect the points. The essay is easy to follow. FirstFor exampleConsequentlyFurthermoreOverallUltimately
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a 'when' clause and a 'because' clause to build complex ideas. The meaning stays clear. migration from rural regions is largely beneficial for people and overall national development when supported by effective urban planningmigration to big cities brings more benefits than harm because it expands career opportunities
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis 'but' contrast joins two full clauses correctly. The complex grammar is accurate. This concern is valid, but the problem lies in governance rather than in migration itself
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and pairings for the topic. This shows a broad lexical range. employment marketssocial mobilityaffordable housinginclusive progress
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including 'healthcare' and 'vocational'. This meets the standard. healthcarevocational
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 244 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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