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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #760 Activities after Class R1
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Schools should organise activity after class. Agree or disagree?

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Schools should organise activity after class. Agree or disagree?
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Schools are increasingly expected to support students beyond formal lessons, and organised activity after class is one proposed approach. In my opinion, schools should organise structured activities after class, because such an extracurricular programme enhances holistic development and promotes educational equity. When designed carefully, activity of this kind complements the learning a class provides rather than distracting from it, so I disagree with critics who see only disruption.

The strongest reason is that organised activity develops the physical and social skills that a normal class cannot easily cultivate in students. For example, sports, music, and debate build teamwork, self-discipline, and emotional resilience, and each activity strengthens the wider education of a young student. Indeed, students who join a school sport or a drama event often gain confidence and social skills that improve academic performance. Consequently, the benefit of such activity justifies schools taking responsibility rather than leaving it to chance.

Another reason is that school-organised activity reduces inequality and improves the health and wellbeing of every student. Notably, not every family can afford private clubs or provide safe supervision after class hours. However, when schools organise inclusive activities on campus, students from diverse backgrounds gain equal engagement, enrichment, and a secure environment. Although some argue that an extended schedule harms health, this challenge can be managed through voluntary participation in each activity.

In conclusion, schools should organise activities after class, because a well-run programme delivers real benefits and ensures fair access for every student. Overall, with careful planning, organised activity strengthens the physical, social, and emotional education that schools owe their students.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly agrees that schools should run after-class activities and supports this with examples of sport and drama. This gives a full and convincing answer. schools should organise structured activities after classstudents who join a school sport or a drama event often gain confidence
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itStrong linkers open ideas and guide the reader through each point. The structure is clear and easy to follow. For exampleConsequentlyNotablyHoweverIn conclusionOverall
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a 'when' clause and an 'although' clause to build complex ideas. The meaning is fully clear. When designed carefully, activity of this kind complements the learningAlthough some argue that an extended schedule harms health, this challenge can be managed
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis relative 'that' clause is joined correctly to the main sentence. The complex grammar is accurate. develops the physical and social skills that a normal class cannot easily cultivate
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and pairings. This shows a wide lexical range. holistic developmenteducational equityemotional resiliencevoluntary participation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form 'programme'. This meets the standard. programmeextracurricular
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 262 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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