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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #728 Costs of Online Materials R1
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Online materials like music, movies, etc. are accessible at no cost. Do you think online material should be accessed at no cost? Support.

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Online materials like music, movies, etc. are accessible at no cost. Do you think online material should be accessed at no cost? Support.
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Digital platforms have made music, films and other creative works widely available without direct payment. While free access expands reach, I do not believe online material should generally be accessed at no cost. A sustainable digital culture requires fair remuneration for creators alongside affordable access for users.

First, creative production depends on predictable income to fund talent, equipment and time. When content is routinely consumed for free, artists and producers struggle to invest in quality and innovation, leading to increasingly uniform output. For example, subscription-based streaming has enabled regular releases and higher production standards by returning steady revenue to creators. The result is a healthier ecosystem in which audiences benefit from diversity and reliability.

Admittedly, free access can promote inclusion, especially for students and low-income users, and can help new artists gain exposure. However, this goal can be met without eliminating payment by using tiered pricing, limited free samples or public funding for educational use. Such models preserve accessibility while signalling that creative labour has value, which discourages piracy and supports long-term viability.

In conclusion, unrestricted free access to online materials undermines the economic foundations of creativity. Fair payment mechanisms encourage sustained production and higher quality, while targeted concessions address equity concerns. Therefore, online content should be affordable and accessible, but not predominantly free.

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Perfect answerPTE Academic · Write Essay
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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that online material should not be free, and supports it with an example about subscription streaming. I do not believe online material should generally be accessed at no costsubscription-based streaming has enabled regular releases and higher production standards
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open each stage of the argument. The ideas flow in a logical order. FirstFor exampleAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusionTherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses time and concessive clauses to build complex sentences. The meaning stays clear. When content is routinely consumed for free, artists and producers struggle to investSuch models preserve accessibility while signalling that creative labour has value
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence links a subject to a longer explaining clause correctly. The grammar is accurate. creative production depends on predictable income to fund talent, equipment and time
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and word pairs about the creative economy. fair remunerationaffordable accesstiered pricinglong-term viability
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly across the essay. piracyexposure
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 214 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It has a clear four-paragraph structure.
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