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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #726 Healthy Diet vs Exercise R1
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A healthy diet is more important for keeping fit than exercise. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give an example or personal experiences.

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A healthy diet is more important for keeping fit than exercise. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give an example or personal experiences.
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Maintaining physical fitness depends on several factors, yet the relative value of diet and exercise is frequently disputed. I largely agree that a healthy diet is more important for keeping fit, because nutrition governs energy balance, body composition, and long-term physical health, while exercise plays a complementary rather than dominant role.

The strongest reason why diet outweighs exercise is that food intake directly controls calorie balance and metabolic stability. Regular physical activity cannot fully offset a poor diet high in sugar, saturated fat, or processed foods. For example, people who exercise consistently but rely on fast food often experience weight gain and persistent fatigue. By contrast, a balanced diet with vegetables, lean protein, and whole grains supports muscle maintenance and sustained energy.

Nevertheless, exercise remains an important supporting factor. Physical activity improves cardiovascular capacity, mobility, and psychological wellbeing, thereby enhancing the effects of good nutrition. From my own experience, reducing refined carbohydrates improved daily energy levels, while regular walking helped maintain concentration and joint health. This shows that exercise strengthens a healthy diet but cannot compensate for nutritional neglect.

In conclusion, I agree to a large extent that diet is more important than exercise for keeping fit, as it shapes the body's core functioning. However, sustainable fitness outcomes are most likely when sound nutrition is combined with regular, moderate physical activity.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer largely agrees that diet matters more than exercise, and supports it with an example about people who exercise but eat fast food. I largely agree that a healthy diet is more important for keeping fitpeople who exercise consistently but rely on fast food often experience weight gain
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words mark each point and the contrast. The essay flows in a logical order. The strongest reasonFor exampleBy contrastNeverthelessIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses cause and contrast clauses to make complex sentences. The meaning stays clear. because nutrition governs energy balance, body composition, and long-term physical healthThis shows that exercise strengthens a healthy diet but cannot compensate for nutritional neglect
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence links an action to its effect correctly with a joining word. The grammar is accurate. thereby enhancing the effects of good nutrition
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words about health and fitness. muscle maintenancemetabolic stabilitycardiovascular capacityrefined carbohydrates
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly across the essay. saturatedconcentration
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 221 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It has a clear four-paragraph structure.
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