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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #707 Aim of Higher Education R1
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Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Should the goal of college education be to ensure that the students find a good job or should it aim at cultivating the students’ overall abilities?

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Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Should the goal of college education be to ensure that the students find a good job or should it aim at cultivating the students’ overall abilities?
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Many argue that the main function of higher education is to prepare graduates for employment. I largely disagree with this narrow interpretation. Although employability matters, the central purpose of college education is the cultivation of students' intellectual, social, and ethical abilities, which support durable success in both professional and personal spheres.

When universities emphasise the development of overall abilities, they equip students with transferable skills that retain value despite economic change. Critical thinking, effective communication, and adaptability allow graduates to respond to shifting labour markets and rapid technological disruption. For instance, a student trained to analyse complex problems and collaborate across disciplines can transition between roles more effectively than someone educated only in fixed vocational routines. Broader education therefore enhances, rather than undermines, long-term career prospects.

Nevertheless, some contend that higher education without a strong employment focus risks becoming impractical. This concern is understandable, yet it overlooks the realities of contemporary workplaces. Employers increasingly value individuals who can learn independently, exercise sound judgement, and behave responsibly. These qualities are fostered through academic inquiry, debate, and exposure to diverse fields, not through narrow job training alone.

In conclusion, higher education must not be reduced to a mechanism for securing immediate employment. By prioritising the development of overall abilities while still supporting career readiness, colleges prepare students for sustainable careers, active citizenship, and lifelong learning, thereby benefiting both individuals and society.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay reformulates the question and gives a clear disagreeing view. It supports the point with a specific student example. the central purpose of college education is the cultivation of students' intellectual, social, and ethical abilitiesa student trained to analyse complex problems and collaborate across disciplines
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear linking words to open sentences and paragraphs. These devices keep the argument well sequenced and easy to follow. When universities emphasiseFor instanceBroader education therefore enhancesNevertheless, some contendIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with relative and concessive clauses with ease. The meaning is fully clear. which support durable success in both professional and personal spheresAlthough employability matters, the central purpose
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls complex grammar accurately, joining clauses with despite and a relative clause. The construction is precise. they equip students with transferable skills that retain value despite economic change
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a broad academic lexis with strong collocations. These words are precise and well chosen. transferable skillsCritical thinkingsound judgementactive citizenship
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British forms emphasise and judgement. The words are spelled accurately. emphasisejudgement
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 229 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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