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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #687 Overpackaging R1
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Do you think consumer should avoid over-packaged products or it is the manufacturer that should avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

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Do you think consumer should avoid over-packaged products or it is the manufacturer that should avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
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Excessive packaging has become a significant environmental and economic concern, as many goods are wrapped far beyond their functional needs. While consumers can influence demand through purchasing choices, the main responsibility should lie with manufacturers to limit unnecessary packaging. Decisions made during production shape the market and largely determine the volume of waste created before products even reach shops.

Manufacturers control product design, material selection, and distribution systems, meaning that reductions at the source are far more effective than relying on individual behaviour. For example, many electronic items are sold in oversized plastic boxes with multiple internal layers that add little real protection. When companies redesign packaging to be minimal and efficient, costs fall and environmental damage is reduced throughout the supply chain.

It is true that consumers are not powerless, and avoiding over-packaged goods can send a signal to producers. In my own experience, choosing loose fruit and vegetables instead of pre-wrapped alternatives has noticeably reduced household waste. However, such efforts are restricted by limited availability, convenience, and pricing structures set by businesses, making consumer avoidance an incomplete response.

In conclusion, although consumers can contribute through mindful purchasing, manufacturers have a far greater capacity and obligation to prevent excessive packaging. By redesigning products and prioritising sustainable materials, they can achieve large-scale waste reduction. Meaningful progress therefore depends mainly on responsible manufacturing behaviour rather than individual restraint.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe opinion is stated early and backed with a clear personal example. the main responsibility should lie with manufacturers to limit unnecessary packagingchoosing loose fruit and vegetables instead of pre-wrapped alternatives
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itLinking words guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next. For exampleHoweverIn conclusiontherefore
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles a concession clause and a cause clause with control and clarity. While consumers can influence demand through purchasing choicesmeaning that reductions at the source are far more effective
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence links two ideas correctly with no visible errors. When companies redesign packaging to be minimal and efficient, costs fall
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise topic words and collocations show a broad word range. Excessive packagingmaterial selectionsupply chainmindful purchasing
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. prioritisingbehaviour
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 227 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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