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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #664 Climate Change R1
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Who is responsible for Climate change, Government or industries?

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Who is responsible for Climate change, Government or industries?
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Climate change emerges from cumulative emissions embedded in modern economic systems rather than isolated individual actions. Although industries generate most greenhouse gases, governments design the regulatory and economic contexts in which production occurs. Responsibility is therefore shared; however, governments carry the primary obligation to guide industries towards low-carbon development through coherent policy, incentives, and enforcement mechanisms.

Governments possess unique authority to set emission limits, price carbon, and invest in transport and energy infrastructure that reshape markets. Clear regulation can quickly transform industrial behaviour; for example, when renewable targets encourage clean energy investment and accelerate the retirement of coal facilities. In the absence of consistent policy signals, competitive pressures reward pollution, making voluntary environmental restraint by firms commercially fragile and uneven.

Industries nonetheless bear substantial responsibility because they directly control technologies, supply chains, and day-to-day operational emissions. Corporate choices regarding energy sourcing, product design, and disclosure can reduce pollution immediately and at scale. Some argue that companies merely respond to consumer demand, yet this view underestimates their power to innovate, lobby for favourable rules, and normalise sustainable practises across global operations.

In conclusion, climate change cannot be attributed to a single actor, but accountability should be weighed realistically. Governments must lead by establishing credible and enforceable frameworks that align profit incentives with decarbonisation, while industries must deliver rapid operational change within those rules. Only this balanced division of responsibility can produce durable and meaningful emission reductions.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay reshapes the question in its own words and gives a clear position. It supports the point about government power with the example of renewable targets. governments carry the primary obligation to guide industries towards low-carbon developmentwhen renewable targets encourage clean energy investment and accelerate the retirement of coal facilities
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows smoothly and shares responsibility clearly across paragraphs. These linkers help the reader follow the balanced argument. thereforehowever,for example,nonethelessIn conclusion,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease and full clarity. This subordinate structure shows control of tricky grammar. In the absence of consistent policy signals, competitive pressures reward pollutionthis view underestimates their power to innovate, lobby for favourable rules
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe essay keeps consistent control of complex grammar. This relative clause is built accurately. governments design the regulatory and economic contexts in which production occurs
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer shows a broad and exact vocabulary with strong collocations. These terms match the climate topic well. cumulative emissionsenforcement mechanismssupply chainsdecarbonisation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct across the essay, including the British form. These words are written accurately. practisesgreenhouse
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 235 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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