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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #656 Impact of Law R1
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Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
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Many debates question whether legislation merely reflects social norms or actively reshapes conduct. In this essay, I will argue that law can indeed change human behaviour, particularly when rules are clear, enforced, and aligned with public interests. While personal values matter, legal frameworks create incentives and constraints that guide everyday choices.

First, law alters behaviour through deterrence and standard setting. Penalties increase the cost of harmful actions, while formal rules signal acceptable practice. For example, compulsory seatbelt regulations rapidly normalised safer driving by combining fines with consistent policing. Consequently, people generally adjusted their habits even when supervision was minimal, and over time compliance became routine rather than coerced.

Admittedly, critics argue that behaviour rooted in culture cannot be legislated. However, laws often accelerate cultural change by validating new norms and protecting early adopters. Anti-discrimination statutes clearly illustrate this effect. By prohibiting unequal treatment at work and in services, they compel organisations to revise procedures, train staff, and model inclusive conduct. Moreover, research suggests that these institutional shifts gradually influence attitudes beyond the courtroom.

Overall, law influences behaviour by reshaping incentives, defining norms, and enabling social learning. Admittedly, it does not instantly transform beliefs. Nevertheless, sustained enforcement and fair design make compliance habitual and attitudes more receptive. Therefore, law is not a passive mirror of society but an active instrument that undoubtedly guides behaviour in durable and lasting ways.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay states a clear position in the writer's own words and supports it with a concrete example. The seatbelt case shows exactly how law changes behaviour. law can indeed change human behaviourcompulsory seatbelt regulations rapidly normalised safer driving
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas are ordered clearly and each paragraph opens with a strong linker. These connective words guide the reader smoothly through the argument. First,Consequently,Admittedly,However,Nevertheless,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease and precision. The concession structure joins two contrasting ideas clearly. While personal values matter, legal frameworks create incentives and constraintseven when supervision was minimal
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itGrammar control is consistent, even in longer sentences. This construction with a subordinate clause is accurate. laws often accelerate cultural change by validating new norms and protecting early adopters
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses a broad and exact academic vocabulary. These terms fit the topic of law and society well. deterrenceAnti-discrimination statutesinclusive conductsustained enforcement
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct everywhere, including longer words. These words are written accurately. compliancelegislated
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 228 words, which fits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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